ForsakenAngel

Hi, Forsaken here :D This is really good. I think the beginning is my favorite part of this piece. The only thing that I didn't really like though, was the ...

Hi, I'm Forsaken! I'm going to jump right into this, so stay with me! :D This is really great, I could never right something like this, I don't have the ...

Hey, Forsaken here. This is very good, aside from some grammatical errors in the beginning. Alright, I'm going to jump right into this and I'm going to start with the ...

Hi! Forsaken here :D So I've been reading the previous chapters for the last hour and I must say, this is really good! I look forward to reading more when ...

Hi there. This was really funny! I've read all of these books and agree, you should do the entire series like this. I read this three times and it's funnier ...

Hello there. One word. Wow. This is really awesome! Elise: You never apologized………..Delilah: All I ever heard was “I’m sorry” But I did,……………………………………………�

Hello there. First of all, this is a tragedy what happened to this little child. Caylee Anthony deserved to have a life, but I can't say the same for Casey. ...

Hello there. First off, this has a depressing ring to it, but I love it. My favorite line was: And if you’re with me, like they say you are, Then ...

Hello there! First of all this was just amazing. There's nothing really to correct about it, I didn't find a single mistake. You're a really amazing writer, and as VuzzyCat ...

Hello, Angel here! First off this is kind of amazing! (And by kind of I mean totally.) But I think when you say "u" it throws it off. It would ...

Hello there. I agree with Veritas that the simplicity of it makes it more powerful! I didn't see anything wrong that hasn't been pointed out already. Great job, keep it ...

Oh my, I'm back! At the beginning you said: It needs a LOT of work... But I find nothing wrong with it! Like everything else I read, I really liked ...

Hello again. I love how you color coded it :D it was easier to read somehow. This is very sweet and almost made me cry. There's just something about age ...

Hi again, I'm back as requested. This is really great! I'm not gonna lie, I feel that way most of the time so I understand the emotions you were trying ...

Hello there! First of all, this is amazing! I couldn't think of a better way to say it myself. Second, this brought tears to my eyes! Yes, real tears! And ...