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  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Within the Sands

    Hi, Forsaken here :D This is really good. I think the beginning is my favorite part of this piece. The only thing that I didn't really like though, was the ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Article / Essay » Review, Literature Re: A wild sheep chase

    Hi, I'm Forsaken! I'm going to jump right into this, so stay with me! :D This is really great, I could never right something like this, I don't have the ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Paths and Directions

    Hey, Forsaken here. This is very good, aside from some grammatical errors in the beginning. Alright, I'm going to jump right into this and I'm going to start with the ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Action / Adventure Re: The Cavalcade of the Pied Piper Ch6

    Hi! Forsaken here :D So I've been reading the previous chapters for the last hour and I must say, this is really good! I look forward to reading more when ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Other » General, General Re: Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets (Twitterized)

    Hi there. This was really funny! I've read all of these books and agree, you should do the entire series like this. I read this three times and it's funnier ...

    Jul 29, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: I'm Not Sorry

    Hello there. One word. Wow. This is really awesome! Elise: You never apologized………..Delilah: All I ever heard was “I’m sorry” But I did,……………………………………………

    Jul 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Caylee

    Hello there. First of all, this is a tragedy what happened to this little child. Caylee Anthony deserved to have a life, but I can't say the same for Casey. ...

    Jul 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Laughter

    Hello there. First off, this has a depressing ring to it, but I love it. My favorite line was: And if you’re with me, like they say you are, Then ...

    Jul 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Grace Forgotten

    Hello there! First of all this was just amazing. There's nothing really to correct about it, I didn't find a single mistake. You're a really amazing writer, and as VuzzyCat ...

    Jul 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Day dreams

    Hello, Angel here! First off this is kind of amazing! (And by kind of I mean totally.) But I think when you say "u" it throws it off. It would ...

    Jul 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Bird

    Hello there. I agree with Veritas that the simplicity of it makes it more powerful! I didn't see anything wrong that hasn't been pointed out already. Great job, keep it ...

    Jun 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Redeeming the Time

    Oh my, I'm back! At the beginning you said: It needs a LOT of work... But I find nothing wrong with it! Like everything else I read, I really liked ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Letters to You (REVSIED)

    Hello again. I love how you color coded it :D it was easier to read somehow. This is very sweet and almost made me cry. There's just something about age ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Paint

    Hi again, I'm back as requested. This is really great! I'm not gonna lie, I feel that way most of the time so I understand the emotions you were trying ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Teardrops in the Rain

    Hello there! First of all, this is amazing! I couldn't think of a better way to say it myself. Second, this brought tears to my eyes! Yes, real tears! And ...

    Jun 27, 2011


Why should Caesar just get to stomp around like a giant while the rest of us try not to get smushed under his big feet? Brutus is just as cute as Caesar, right? Brutus is just as smart as Caesar, people totally like Brutus just as much as they like Caesar, and when did it become okay for one person to be the boss of everybody because that's not what Rome is about! We should totally just stab Caesar!
— Gretchen Wieners