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ForeverYoung

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Other Re: The Old Man And The Boy - Epilogue

    Heyyyyyyy! Forever here for a review! What should I really say except that the story was so good and I am more than 200 percent honest in that. It's how ...

    Aug 12, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Old Man And The Boy 8

    Hey! Forever here with a review!!! There were none of the cries and footsteps of everyday, and the absence disturbed him in a way he did not understand That 'were' ...

    Aug 12, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Eclipse: Chapter 11

    Heyyyyy! Forever here for a review!!! Apart from the great chapters that you write, I should say you are great at art too. The drawings of the characters that you ...

    Aug 11, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: They told me

    Heyyyy! Forever here for a review!! It's really sad that nothing rhymes with orange except sporange which rhymes perfectly with it. And I am glad that you decided to write ...

    Aug 11, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Pearls

    Heyyy! Forever here with a review!! First of all, it was an awesome poem, I should say. Though very short, it has a deep thought as well as a deep ...

    Aug 11, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: 4 things to be careful of

    Heyyyy! Forever here for a review! The last stanza constitues one of the best advice I have ever heard. It's great, I mean really brilliant! The alliteration was also awesome. ...

    Aug 11, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Chapter One - Dad Hacked Death (OLD)

    Heyyy! Forever here for a short review!!!! The dead boy Q had grown so fond of gripped her hand. “You’ll be alright, Q,” he said, looking Q in the eyes. ...

    Aug 10, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Dragon Thief

    Heyyyyyyy! Forever here for a review!! This was awesome as a short story and if you want to extend it, then also, it would be awesome. Well, actually you write ...

    Aug 10, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Realistic Re: The Old Man And The Boy 7

    Heyyyyyy!!! Forever here for a short review! It seemed important that the moment remained between them, it's significance understood only by the two of them. It's will be its I ...

    Aug 10, 2021
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Horror Re: The Monkey in the Cornfield

    Heyyyyyy! Forever here for a review!! The story reminds me of a line, "For a believer, no proof is necessary and for a skeptic, no proof is possible." This was ...

    Aug 10, 2021
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Klein Sankt Paul

    Heyyyyyyyy! Forever here for a review!! First of all, I would like to talk about the use of different tounges. Instead of using the language and then writing its translation, ...

    Aug 9, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Historical Fiction Re: A Carolina Millennial in A Prehistoric Tribe: Chapter Two

    Heyyyyy! Forever back here for a tiny review! Mathew seems to be an interesting person. There was not much character development in the first chapter. So, I didn't comment on ...

    Aug 9, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Spiritual Re: A Carolina Millennial in A Prehistoric Tribe: Chapter One

    Heyyyyy! Forever here for a review! Saw the second chapter in the green room so I decided to start from the beginning. I will review part 1and 2 consecutively. This ...

    Aug 9, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Eclipse: Chapter 10

    Heyy! Forever here for a review! This was a great chapter as always your chapters are. Dr. Elfrida seems to be a very strict woman about her occupation. She strictly ...

    Aug 8, 2021
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: My First Friend

    Heyyyy! Forever here for a review! I don't have words to say... It's an ineffable feeling I am having at the moment. This was so relative and I could relate ...

    Aug 8, 2021


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