ForeverYoung299

Heyyyy! Forever here for a review!! I am really glad that I understood the science things. And yeah, I really like it how you incorporates real life science and then ...

Heyyy!!! Forever here with a review!! Oh this was so good! It was a great start to a novel. Something which I noticed is the tense. The first two paragraphs ...

Heyyyy! Forever with a review! This was a good chapter. Harold seems to be much more observing than the other two though all three of them are in a bad ...

Heyyyyy! Forever here with a review!! Let's start with the quotes first. After pulling my fingers through my hair and detangling it to the best of my ability, all that's ...

Heyyyy! Forever here with a review! Ah you created a great atmosphere there. Like the atmosphere seems to be kind of peaceful interrupted by the chirping of the birds every ...

Heyyyyy! Forever here for a review!! A new perspective! I like how you portrayed the minds of people and the fact that people reach to conclusions without even thinking and ...

Heyyyyyy! @Foreveryoung299(this is how to tag a person) here for a review!!! This is a great improvement. This chapter was a lot better than the first chapter, I think. A ...

Heyyyy! Forever here with a review! This was a pretty little chapter. The story is slowing a bit, I guess. Maybe not a little bit, but a lot. But that's ...

Heyyyyyy! Forever back here with a review! Something which I didn't understand about the chapter is the relation between Harold and these people. The conversation doesn't really prove that they ...

Heyyyyy!! Forever back here with a review!! Alice is alive!! I was right, anyway. I wonder what really happened to her hand. I guessed it that she can suffer some ...

Heyyyyy! Forever back with a review!! This was a pretty cool chapter but I missed details about the fate of Alice. Considering the fact that it's Rory's perspective, that is ...

Heyyyyyy! Forever back with a review!!!! This chapter was so good packed with lots of actions. Here, you managed to expose the soft side of Alice quite well. Her desire ...

Heyyyy! Forever here with a review! Seems like the friendship is at its peak and the bonding between Rory and Alice is quite strong, unbreakable perhaps. Now, that makes me ...

Hey Forever back with a review!!!! I can't really see anything very wrong with the chaptef and also the reason behind you not liking it. I quite liked it. This ...

Heyyyyy! Forever here with a review! Seems like it's been an epoch since I read the last chapter. Anyway, let's get right into it. Seems like she really killed Jose ...