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Hey there! Forever here with a quick review!! To start with, that was a really good beginning. "The world is boring" was definitely a fun addition after those typical lines ...

Hey! Forever here with a short review! First things first, this poem had a very natural flow which I really liked, except in a few places. First od all, Smelling ...

Hey! Forever here with a short review!! This was overall a very interesting read and a good chapter to start your story with. I do think that it kind of ...

Hey! Forever here with a short review! This was a really beautiful poem that you wrote. First of all, I am going to talk about the specifics. Isn't that it ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! Ooh this was loong! We will see what I can review. Let's start with the review. I really like the plot and the charcters. ...

Hey!! Forever here with a really short review!! Ooh I remember having read this story a few days ago and found it a very sympathetic and emotional one. So without ...

Hey there! Forever here with a review!! Just a heads up that I have not read the previous chapters so I might not be acquainted with a few things. That ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! You wrote a really neat poem. First of all, I am going to give a few specifics and then jump into overall. If we ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! That was a really good short story. You did a great job to present the action scene with all its vigorous actions and the ...

Hey! Forever here with a review! That was a super intriguing prologue. I really liked the plot and the slight character development we had there. It certainly makes the reader ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! Seems like we have quite a long piece here. I am going to review it in parts. Let's start! Beginning Oh wow, I really ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! Okay first of all, I would really like to jump into a few specifics and then I will go to my overall interpretation. He ...

Hey! Forever here with a review! Title The title seemed pretty interesting, so I thought I would give it a look. Although I don't think a proper relation has yet ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! So the first thing that struck me was the lack of punctuations in the third stanza. As long as I know, there are two ...

Hey! Forever here with a tiny review!! Ah well, this was a good story. So first and foremost, your paragraphs were way too long. I actually had a lot of ...