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I LOVE the Daughters of the Moon series!! I still haven't gotten around to buying any though. :cry: But that's going to change!! I've read one book from Sarah Dessen, ...

Hey, I read The Crucible , for an English assignment. I thought it was okay, the book was okay. The plot was well thought out as well as the characters ...

Well, I don't know about you guys, but I really liked Eragon and Eldest. Though the movie...let's not go there. I have to say though, when I was reading both ...

Very interesting, the good way, of course. The rhythm flows well, but it kind of rushes here and there. A few grammar mistakes, but that can be fixed. I like ...

Well, this is the secnd piece I've read from you and I have to say...I love it! I believe you're very talented, so don't be afraid to continue writing. Once ...

Hey, hey, I like this poem. I think it's great! The flow of the words and the rhythm was, I hesitate to say, perfect. Liked the way you ended the ...

I like your story, it's very interesting (the good way, of course). The first few lines, in the first paragraph, grabbed my attention right away, so that's good. I thought ...

I really liked this beginning, it gets your attention. *I'd suggest putting it in the Fantasy Section* Can't wait to see what happens next! :wink:

It's getting better and insteresting. Your characters are developing, Draconan, the magician, the Elves, the humans, and so forth. Also, taking your plot along. Well, the grammars and stuff have ...

Very interesting introduction, as in good. There's definately room for improvement but I liked it. Maybe you could arrange the paragraphs a little different or a little more detail. Gave ...

Incredible ineresting, in a very good way. I liked the story and would like to see more of it soon. There was one or two very minor mistakes that I'm ...

Well, what can say I say, it was short, but I loved it. Liked the way you wrote "rhythmically" and kept the mood and everything kind of sweet, sad, and ...

Oh, I read this and I really liked it. To me, this is something that I could see happening and understand it, you know. I liked the way you began ...

You're my new best friend Macky!!! :wink: I've read Eragon and Eldest and I share the same opinion!! Can't, really, wait for the third and last book. :P

Woah! Awsome job with this. I really liked the way you introduced Ellie, nice. I guess it wasn't long enough, 'cause I want to read more. What do you mean ...