Flower~Child

I really like this poem. I was going to comment earlier, but I had to go to school. There isn't anything that I don't like about it really. Keep Writing ...

Thank you for the reviews and I will emmylou.

I don't see what you mean by the killing him thing...but oh well. I think that you could do without the repition of and I remember all the time but ...

I have one simple word that I must say for this review. "Amazing."

The box represents my parents, and other people that put pressure on me. Thank you for the review :]]

Thank you for the wonderful reviews. I will start making some changes on the line length right now, and the punctuation all well. Thank you.

Sorry I didn't laugh, I got confused, didn't know if the purpose was to be funny. I guess I am just a bad sport or something. The Line things ( ...

I really like this. It's very ironic that I am reading a book that is about circus freaks and such haha. Very good job. -Flower-

I really like this, I like the layout and all. I don't see anything that I would want to change. -Flower-

This is so wonderful, it made my day reading this! I can't see anything that I would change I liked it so much! Havn't heard anything quite as good in ...

I really like this. I feel the emotion that you are sharing through this and it is amazing to me how wonderful this is. I love it keep writing. -Flower-

Ok, I think that the beggining wasn't as good as the end. It got stronger but the rhyme sceme wasn't very good. Work on that and it would be very ...

Thank you June I will do. I will work on this later today if I have the time.

I am a Christian haha, I was thinking of saving people you know like from hell.

When I wrote it, I just kept writing without looking at it. I read it over and saw some spots that looked bad but I was at a loss at ...