Flower~Child

Besides what is written above I like this, so keep writing.

Yes, I like this, it's so dark and evil hahah. This is a really good poem.

HAHA I love it! I don't think it could get any better!

I like the way you have the poem written. I think that if you made the lines shorter like moved it down a little it would look better. Thats all ...

I like this, is the style rap??? Anyway you want to make sure you keep it far enough away from the songs that inspired it or it wont be original. ...

I think this poem is good, but you need more punctuation and capitalization in it.

I think you are talking about being held captive, but I'm not sure. I think it is good just not really clear.

I like this, it gives good detail I think. The first line didn't flow the best for me, but that may just be me. I liked the second part of ...

Sorry I try to review all the time, but it doesn't count it as a review. I dunno about the poem, it didn't take long so maybe that was it.

The guy in the poem has died, and the only way that she will ever see him again is to die herself, and at the end of the poem she ...

I think the spelling and the punctuation was very off. The words have potential, but not so far apart.

I agree on the period's and comma's, but I like the style of it keep up the good work.

I know what you are getting at, and I like this.

I think this needs some work, like need no love to shared? shouldnt it be share?

I like it, but it is just to choppy for me. I like to be able to read, and for it to flow more.