Flower~Child

I loved the Twilight series! I can't believe all you people. Maybe there were some things wrong with it, but can ya'll write like that and then sell a lot ...

I have read two of the books and I am reading the third right now. My favorite character is Dustfinger, and my favorite book so far is inkspell.

I like this also, even though long poems are not really my thing. Keep Writing -Flower-

hmmmmm..... I don't know if i liked it. It is true on what guys think and do, but it just seems like the lines are a little long. I will ...

I love dark poetry, it is my favorite! I think you did wonderful on this. Keep writing I love it. -Flower-

I love this, like they say I see no mistakes. Good Job! Keep Writing -Flower-

This is very creative. It gives the way you see things, and yet it keeps discription! I love this! Keep Writing -flower-

Wow I like this, it's kinda dark though. I'm not good with reviews haha, but I don't see anything big wrong with it. Good Job Keep Writing -Flower-

I like this, I saw some punctuation errors but thats it. keep writing -Flower-

I really like the poem itself, when I was reading it I didn't even notice the lack of punctuatin haha. I think you could cut it down some and check ...

I think that a couple of the sentences don't fit. like the one about he baby, but the rest is perfect. I love the way you wrote this. Kepp writing ...

I absolutly love this. It is amazing! The only thing is that a couple of lines are to long and it messes it up. Besides that I love this, and ...

I had it in stanzas but they would go from two to four and I didn't think anybody would like that. Thanks for the review. I will go back and ...

I don't know how to delete that post, and it was a long time ago. Anyway thanks for the advise I will try and use it and come up with ...

I absolutely love this. I think the ending is the best. I know this isn't much help, but I like it so much I really can't review it. I can't ...