We are the urban guerrilla,
The forbidden,
Outlawed
Warriors of the city.
We lack the honor
Of your pomp and circumstance armies.
We hide,
We steal,
We cheat,
We lie.
And we don't care.
We infect
Your clean, pristine cities
And make them our own.
We are
The dirty, abandoned buildings
That mar your pretty skyline.
We are the conmen,
The petty thieves,
So you don't get complacent.
There is no complacency here,
Not for you.
We are the underworld,
The rats,
The roots,
The foot-thick layer of grime
In your sparkling, perfect city.
We are the urban guerrilla
Fighting it out in the streets,
In the alleys,
In the secret Chinatown government.
We undermine your rule,
Taking your skyscrapers
From under your feet.
We're making this city ours -
As if it was ever yours to begin with.
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It's people like you that make this website worth waiting through the five minutes that it takes to load up. I love it when there're poems in here that I can actually understand...
I think that 'Urban Guerrilla' was great. I love the dark imagery you used- for example,
I just love your choice of words... the way that you told it straight-up, exactly how it is... brilliant.
As for the argment that was going on... those lines were right the first time.
Awesome job, and keep writing. I can't even find anything to critique.
I don't think som I think it was put that way on purpose.
Should it be: "As if it was never yours to begin with."?
~Meep(:
Wow I like this, it's kinda dark though. I'm not good with reviews haha, but I don't see anything big wrong with it.
Good Job
Keep Writing
-Flower-