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Flower~Child

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Reality

    Hey dear, Flow here as requested! New huh, well welcome to the site! Anyway now down to the review. Ok so I like the second, I guess you would call ...

    Nov 7, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: What if??

    Hey there, Flow here and I will be your reviewer. I hope you have been enjoying the site so far. Please don't take my review as harsh because it isn't ...

    Nov 6, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: When We First Met

    Hey there, Flow here and I will be your reviewer for the morning/afternoon. I really like the simplicity to this, but it could be so much more. Right now you ...

    Nov 6, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: [Title needed]

    Hey there, Flow here and I will be your reviewer for today! I just want to start off by saying that I like this. I love the simplicity of it, ...

    Nov 6, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A poem on the general stupidness of the human race.

    Ok. Well usually I would give an all out review and discuss every stanza, but you don't really have many errors. I realy truly enjoyed this. Like Wayward said above ...

    Nov 6, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Math

    Hey there, Flower here and I will be your reviewer for the evening. Forgive me in advance if I sound harsh, I know you are new and arn't used to ...

    Nov 5, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Alezrani Chapter 2(Summary Included)

    Ok. Well ym review won't be as indepth as the others, but I can give you my opinion. I really like this. I like how you went back and showed ...

    Nov 5, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My Love Song! (Not what think)

    This is pretty freaking awesome for a 10 minute poem dear! I love it! There were a couple of lines I would leave out though. Hello my love. My rainbow, ...

    Nov 5, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Alezrani chapter 1

    (Read the author's note first please) Hello everyone! I'm new here, so please be patient with me. Here is the story I've been working on for a while. I already ...

    Nov 2, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: curiosity

    Flower here, and I will be your reviewer for the evening. C uriosity got the best of me as it usualy dose does. I wonder "how come?" You don't need ...

    Nov 2, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: In Silence Sin Speaks the Loudest

    Hey there :) Here as requested! The first thing I wanted to say was that I really love this. It is full of emotion, and I could relate to it ...

    Nov 2, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I loved you ever patiently

    I want to start off by saying that I love your poem. I am going through the exact same thing right now and it really hit home when I read ...

    Oct 30, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Ash

    Hi all. This is your chance to get back at me if I've recently destroyed one of your pieces with my criticism. :) An older work of mine, but still ...

    Oct 29, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Another Tear to Fall

    Hey there SilentRain! Flow here as requested. The first thing that I noticed about this poem was your flow. You have a nice flow going until you get to the ...

    Oct 28, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: White Eyes (part one)

    I appologize in advance for being so late, but I am here as requested. I had to wait awhile, your story kind of intemidated me. I had to mentally prepare ...

    Oct 24, 2010


Maybe what most people wanted wasn't immortality and fame, but the reassurance that their existence had meant something. No matter how long... or how brief. Maybe being eternal meant becoming a story worth telling.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Nectar of Immortality