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Re: Reality
Hey dear, Flow here as requested! New huh, well welcome to the site! Anyway now down to the review. Ok so I like the second, I guess you would call ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: What if??
Hey there, Flow here and I will be your reviewer. I hope you have been enjoying the site so far. Please don't take my review as harsh because it isn't ...
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: When We First Met
Hey there, Flow here and I will be your reviewer for the morning/afternoon. I really like the simplicity to this, but it could be so much more. Right now you ...
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: [Title needed]
Hey there, Flow here and I will be your reviewer for today! I just want to start off by saying that I like this. I love the simplicity of it, ...
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: A poem on the general stupidness of the human race.
Ok. Well usually I would give an all out review and discuss every stanza, but you don't really have many errors. I realy truly enjoyed this. Like Wayward said above ...
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: Math
Hey there, Flower here and I will be your reviewer for the evening. Forgive me in advance if I sound harsh, I know you are new and arn't used to ...
Nov 5, 2010 -
Re: Alezrani Chapter 2(Summary Included)
Ok. Well ym review won't be as indepth as the others, but I can give you my opinion. I really like this. I like how you went back and showed ...
Nov 5, 2010 -
Re: My Love Song! (Not what think)
This is pretty freaking awesome for a 10 minute poem dear! I love it! There were a couple of lines I would leave out though. Hello my love. My rainbow, ...
Nov 5, 2010 -
Re: Alezrani chapter 1
(Read the author's note first please) Hello everyone! I'm new here, so please be patient with me. Here is the story I've been working on for a while. I already ...
Nov 2, 2010 -
Re: curiosity
Flower here, and I will be your reviewer for the evening. C uriosity got the best of me as it usualy dose does. I wonder "how come?" You don't need ...
Nov 2, 2010 -
Re: In Silence Sin Speaks the Loudest
Hey there :) Here as requested! The first thing I wanted to say was that I really love this. It is full of emotion, and I could relate to it ...
Nov 2, 2010 -
Re: I loved you ever patiently
I want to start off by saying that I love your poem. I am going through the exact same thing right now and it really hit home when I read ...
Oct 30, 2010 -
Re: Ash
Hi all. This is your chance to get back at me if I've recently destroyed one of your pieces with my criticism. :) An older work of mine, but still ...
Oct 29, 2010 -
Re: Another Tear to Fall
Hey there SilentRain! Flow here as requested. The first thing that I noticed about this poem was your flow. You have a nice flow going until you get to the ...
Oct 28, 2010 -
Re: White Eyes (part one)
I appologize in advance for being so late, but I am here as requested. I had to wait awhile, your story kind of intemidated me. I had to mentally prepare ...
Oct 24, 2010
