Flower~Child

Its flow isn't really well a flow. I like things that you can just read through without having to put a whole lot of though into it. I like how ...

Ok, I did like this sorta. It needs work. First of all the punctuation, and capitalization is all wrong. When you read things in a book do you want to ...

I really like this alot. It gives a new meaning to the boy who cried wolf. The only thing I don't really get is you say that you died, and ...

Ok, some of these books sound like things I am going to have to read in school haha. I suggest the Percey jackson and the olimpians series, the series of ...

I don't know that I can review. I don't know that I understand all the words, simply because I am not very smart. I like things dumbed down to my ...

I don't mean to be rude, and if ya'll start sellin books I will buy and read them, but I do really like Twilight. I think that it's because it ...

on behalf of the guys... sort of... the only ones that are really like that are the ones that are shallow and stupid...and insecure and what not.....and i know whats ...

Ok, i am going to review this. First of all before you post something check your spelling. I see alot of errors in this piece. Second, it doesn't have the ...

Yes, this should be in lyrics, but I do like this. Oh and if you don't want it ripped apart I suggest not posting it. That is what this site ...

Ok, I am going to try and review this. It has some rhyme, but it isn't completly rhyming. I see some grammar errors, like when you said me it ended ...

We're making this city ours - As if it was ever yours to begin with. Should it be: "As if it was never yours to begin with."? ~Meep(: I don't ...

Ok flower here. First of all you have some flow at the end, but nowhere else. Which makes this a little weird. I don't really get the message. Is it ...

I think that the lines are to long for this. Some lines are long, but you continue on with it on the next line. Not to be mean, but I ...

I'm going to just point out that flow is not a necessity of poetry and thus ignore that statement since it;s clearly a difference of taste. Not all of my ...

Okay this is a short poem but I thought I'd share it with you all... This monster must surely be starved. From me, it continues to carve. I fall weaker, ...