Published June 15, 2009
Do you want to see?
See through my eyes
Do you want to see?
See the truth and the lies
I might be odd
Strange, different, scary
But all I say on my todd
Its right, real deary
Lose your eyes to see
Yes, that’s what you can do
Or be like me
Not blind, no, not blind
Mme, lose your sanity
It’s easier than you think
It’s not such a great calamity
It’s nicer than you think
So I ask you
Do you want to see?
Be blind or be mad too?
Get back to me when you know
Oh, you know now?
Madness is stupid
To reality and cruelty you bow
But not anymore
You’re here now
Ready mad
Ha ha ready made
Ready mad and really mad
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Ok, I am going to try and review this.
It has some rhyme, but it isn't completly rhyming.
I see some grammar errors, like when you said me it ended up mme. (or was it supposes to be that way?)
It could flow a little better, but that is up to you.
Keep Writing
-Flower-