FlamingPhoenix

Ahh the name Vesirrion a friend listed a whole lot of names for me and that was one of them. So maybe it has come form somewhere, but I don't ...

Hello again! I want to thank you for the review! It was very sweet and helpful. ;) Now how to pronounce Ndutu's name, well the N and the D aren't ...

:D

Okay I've gone ahead and fixed some of the mistakes and changed some of the sentences that didn't sound right!

Oh gosh so many mistakes what was I doing! O.O I will try and find time to fix it all up. Thank you so much for the review, I'm sorry ...

Hmm okay I understand that!

No problem!

Thank you again for the review, I will think over all you have said and try and fix it when I edit. I will be posting the next chapter soon.

Thanks for your review! I ended the chapter here because it seams like the best place, other wise I wouldn't have had a better place to end it, it would ...

I'm glad you liked the review! :D That's okay if its short.

Ahh I understand. ;)

Thanks for the review, I'm busy going through my chapters at the moment and fixing all the things you are pointing out, again thank you for the review, I look ...

Thank you so much for the review, it was very motivating. I'm glad you like Ndutu! His really funny sometimes! I'll keep tagging you.

Thank you so much for the review! It was very sweet, and thank you for pointing out the mistakes. I will fix them soon. I'll try and add some more ...

Your welcome!