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I have know idea how those three all started with R's but the names fit them so I'm not complaining. Oh gosh sometimes I wonder if my fingers have their ...

Well I'm glad I could do that with out even knowing! This will make the story more enjoyable for you then. I try and give each of my characters a ...

Okay, but take it easy, I can see your getting tired. Don't over work. :D

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Yeah tell me about it that what happened to a few of my others, so this time I'm being strict.

I'll try and do that they normally don't have much time. Lol

Thanks again! Maybe when I go back an rewrite this I'll explain more about his parents and why there were outlaws. But they were outlaws because they were against the ...

Another review! Dude your on fire! Yes Richard and Rachel's friendship is rather tight, and I'm glad I could bring that across. These reviews are helping me a ton! Thank ...

Cool!

Glad to hear!

Hehe and the plot only gets thicker! You keep reading and you'll find out more! I can see at this stage of my writing I was to excited to get ...

Darn I meant to say place. XD Thanks for the review yet again! Oh and don't worry about the comma thing it easier as the reader to pick them up, ...

Again thank you for the review! There is so much I can't wait for you to read! I'm getting all excited! There were a few things in this review I ...

Thank you so much for the amazing review! I haven't read this chapter in a wile and I can see all the mistakes you pointed out. This review was a ...