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Re: Homecoming 3.1
Hi @Tsunami here to review. Well I really like you peace. It was really good. I loved reading it. Your description it really good, But I would like to point ...
Aug 10, 2018 -
Re: The Last Sketch
Hi @Tsunami here! WOW!! This short is full of emotions. I really like it. If you don't mind me saying but this would be a grate story. You have a ...
Aug 10, 2018 -
Re: Run
Hi Tsunami hear. First of WOW!!!!! You really had me worried there. I really love the title to the story it was simple but it drew me in. So great ...
Aug 9, 2018 -
Re: The Storm
Hi EagleFly. First off I LOVED this short story you have here. But I'm going to be honest. I've seen your writing lately and it is great so maybe you ...
Aug 9, 2018 -
Re: chapter 3
Hi, @Tsunami here one again with a review. :D I hope I help. Okay once again every this is really good don't get me wrong but I think you an ...
Aug 2, 2016 -
Re: chapter 2
Hi Tsunami here again with a review. I hope you like it now I loved every thing in this chapter all except the description. but every this ells was okay ...
Aug 2, 2016 -
Re: 'The Goblin of Darkness' - Chapter One - Black Smog
Hi Tsunami here with a review for your great chapter I hope you like it, and if it is rude in any way let me no. Because I don't mean ...
Aug 2, 2016 -
Re: Everlasting Life-Chapter Six
Hi, Ashley123. I'm sorry but I can't review this work it was really good but what I wanted to point out felistia pointed out. But I can still point out ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: Unsafe~ Chapter 4
Hi dogs I'm here to give your chapter like you asked me to sorry it took so long. Okay I just have one thing that I want you to fix. ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: The Automaton's Heart: Chapter 2
Hi, @Tsunami here again to review your chapter. Okay like I said in the review on chapter 1. I really liked your choice of name for the story. I all ...
Jul 20, 2016 -
Re: The Automaton's Heart: Chapter 1
Hi, @Tsunami here to give your work a review like you asked. Okay lets start with what I liked about your chapter. I really liked your choice of name for ...
Jul 19, 2016 -
Re: The Automaton's Heart: Glossary
Hi @Tsunami here to give your work a review like you asked. Wow this was a really good idea now I think I will under stand your novel even more. ...
Jul 19, 2016 -
Re: The Enchanted- Prologue
Hi, my name is @Tsunami and I am here to give your great prologue a review. Oh and if this review is rude in any way I am sorry just ...
Jul 18, 2016 -
Re: June's Story
Hi, Asher123 Tsunami here with a review on your great story like I said. :D I hope I help. Okay the story is really good I will sure say that. ...
Jul 1, 2016 -
Re: Everlasting Life- Chapter Five
Hi this is a really good story. :D Great work. I hope you are going to posset the next chapter soon I am looking foreword to it. :D This chapter ...
Jul 1, 2016