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Re: Silence: Chapter One
:thud: Amazing! Loved the short sentence style and everything. The only nitpicks I have are already said so I'm not going to repeat them. GREAT JOB!!!
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: Sarah's Eyes
This was fantastic! No nitpicks left to do. Everyone else did a good job of it. I like this. You should do more. Alex
Aug 14, 2008 -
Re: Intimacy
This is great! I can't really find anything wrong with it. I like that you suddenly hit us that she's homosexual at the end but um... Isn't there a rule ...
Aug 14, 2008 -
Re: Are They Listening?
This is great! I can't really find anything to nitpick about. Maybe other people will... I don't know. Alex
Jul 31, 2008 -
Re: Ancient Lies; the prologue.
This is great! All nitpicks have already been done. So there's nothing for me to say except this was well-done. Keep the good work up. Alex
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: My Immortal
Sigh.... All the nitpicking that I can think of is already done. This was great! I loved it but i agree that one section was a huge info dump... That's ...
Jun 20, 2008 -
Re: Chasing The Sun (Chapter 1)
A sequel! Why didn't you tell me??? All the mistakes are already pointed out. This is great! Keep up the good work! Alex
Jun 15, 2008 -
Re: Ever Happily
Some of this didn't really make sense. And i agree with Imp that some of Claire's talking sounds off. I can't really see anything else. Not bad. Alex
May 14, 2008 -
Re: Chap. 7/Part 2 of Wrong or Right
Even if Calix did have sex with Eric, Chad probably wouldn't care... Because it was a bet in the first place right? So.... Alex
May 11, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 5 of Wrong or Right
This is GREAT! Keep up the GOOD work. How can you write like this??? It seems like you've actually experienced it but I know you haven't so... Unbelievable. Keep going! ...
May 6, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 4 of Wrong or Right
This was great! All of the nitpicking has already been done so there's nothing left for me to say. Keep up the good work! Alex
May 6, 2008 -
Re: Shadows On the Ceiling
What i like though is the first and third sections of the song. Not all of it is bad. SORRY for being so harsh. Alex
May 6, 2008 -
Re: Dawning
I like this! I'm not a very big fan of poetry but oh well. I still liked this. And i agree with deafwriter_19... I did have this image of Yoda ...
Apr 29, 2008 -
Re: First Kiss
Great! Everything else has already been pointed out. I can't find anything else wrong with it... :D
Apr 24, 2008 -
Re: Harry/Hermione Fanfiction Chap. 1
Great! I agree with summerless. Don't use the word sexy so often. I liked the accent of Ron. It actually made him sound like he was drunk. Good job!
Apr 24, 2008