Fireweed

i like it, very passionate. i can never relate to these kind of poems since ive never been in a relationship... but still, its moving.

cool, lol, i can totally relate to it. and i too love the twitching thing... so random.

its sweet and seems heartfelt. i dunno about the form its written in... maybe you could write it out in line so it would look more... poem-ish.

nice!! i dont think the 4th stanza is out of place at all. its the best part in my opinion. i also like the last line alot, it feels very ...

nice! this was refreshing to read, it had the sense of just starting over didnt seem forced aat all. i like the title, too, its very casual.

interesting. quite scattered but i like it. i didnt really understand it, except for that its oblviously about theft. i really like the lines about the poor, perfume smothered rich ...

i dont mean to be rude or anything but i hate the oxford english dictionary!! GRRRAAARRR!!! it sucks man!! i swear, its so friggin confusing!! cuz it explains all the ...

oooh!! the world become so much clearer. :D i like this alot. georgia okeefe is awesome, and i think this poem captures her paintings well.

wow, VERYdifferent look at a doll! thats good, lots of raw emotion and you pulled off the rhyming well.

lol, thats funny and cool. ive only heard a little green day, but i like them and i no they are NOT pop.

oooh, it gets better and better!! keep it up. hey you hardly even had any typos this time!! i think pel seems cool. cant wait to read the next chapter.

nice! it reminded me of a dr. suess poem because of the sing- song rhyming, but at the same time it seemed serious and meaningful. i like how it seems ...

i dont really understand what this is about, but i like how it seems kind of hopeful and dreamy.i love the line " i mused with the metre of the ...

i like this alot. it made me smile. i think you captured the way night feels really well. keep writing!! :D

WOW!! awesome!! lovely rythym, great imagery... the mood is so whimsical and frolicking. i love the line" they glow with faerie phospherescence." i wish i had written this. awesome job.