Firelight

This was really, really good! I once had a friend who was in a wheelchair, so I can sort of relate to the story. I was really intrigued by the ...

This is incredible. I enjoyed every word I read. Your writing is so vivid, the characters really jump out at you. I could really imagine the music being played, the ...

AHHHHHHHHH! That was the sound of me being blow away by this piece. A-hem. Now that that's out of my system, let's get to reviewing! ‘Visis? Kim Visis?’ I just ...

Oh my god. This.....this is a work of art. I love it. I saw the title and I was totally not expecting this, but it was worth it. It was ...

Fire here, and I think you have done some great work with this story. First off, I simply love this idea. I always like reading stories in the POV of ...

Fire here, a fellow Stitch, come to review for review day! First off, I must warn you, I'm not the greatest with poetry or lyric reviewing, but I'll do my ...

Fire here, representing the Stitches for this review day ;) First things first: Whoa. This actually blew me away. I absolutely loved this description. It was bone-chillingly real. This was ...

Fire here :) Welcome to YWS! I really like this poem concept, and this poem in general. I really like space and the stars and all that fun stuff, so ...

Well. I was not expecting a story like this, but I loved it. It was really funny, and I really got into it. The brother was funny, but I also ...

I, being from the U.S., don't know too much about South Africa, but I do know I really liked this a lot. You have a lot of emotion in this ...

Hi! I really liked this chapter. It was very well written. The only nitpick I saw was mentioned in the below comment by Dracula, so there's really nothing else I ...

Hey there! I really like this story idea. But there were a couple of things I noticed.. In the beginning, you have a huge run on sentence. You might want ...

Hi there, Fire here! I really like this story. I liked your use of breaking a long short story into short chapters, and I like how they are accompanied by ...

Whoa, nice prolouge. You did a great job on this. It isn't to long that it's a chapter, but it gets the suspense and excitement built up. I didn't notice ...

Fire here :) I really like this story idea. One thing I did notice was that you had a lot of run on sentences that could be broken up. Also, ...