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Re: Pain Pain
Okay, first off, I have to say that I am crying right now. Next, I know where you are. I have been there myself. I was never actually able to ...
Dec 3, 2018 -
Re: Hurt
I am going to jump right into this review! This is a good poem and very relatable. I also used to fight everything that you are talking about in this ...
Dec 3, 2018 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 9.2
Hi there! This is really good! Sad, but still good! I think it was perfectly executed! I love the emotion, the detail, and how well it is written. I think ...
Dec 3, 2018 -
Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 21 (LMS IV)
Hi there! Another really good chapter! Looking forward to more! Now there is only one sentence that could use some work, everything else was really, really good! This sentence: "...feeling ...
Dec 2, 2018 -
Re: Wonder's Lost: Chapter 12 part 2
A very engaging chapter! I like this a lot and am looking forward to more! I can't wait to see what happens! So this is not going to be much ...
Dec 2, 2018 -
Re: So Many Lost Ones - IV (Fin)
This is a neat story! To begin, I am going to point out everything I like about this, and then I will point out the few things I saw that ...
Dec 2, 2018 -
Re: You Are Not a Failure
Hi there! I. LOVE. THIS! It is soo inspiring and so true! This piece speaks out right into the heart of the reader, and it makes them want to do ...
Dec 2, 2018 -
Re: The Shadow Within- Chapter Five; The Building
Hi there! I am definitely hooked into this and can't wait for more! I am going to jump right into this review, and I hope that you find it helpful. ...
Dec 2, 2018 -
Re: Wolf Eyes chapter 7 *rewrite*
Hi there! I like this! It is full of mystery, magic, and heart. Now, I am going to point out a few things that could use a little work. Nothing ...
Dec 2, 2018 -
Re: My Response
I. LOVE. THIS! It strikes the heart straight and true! There is no edits or suggestions I can make. This is perfect, and it is uniquely you! I love that! ...
Nov 30, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 23.1: Ilami
Hi there! This is really interesting! I'm going to have to go check out some of your other work, because this is really good! I'm going to jump right into ...
Nov 30, 2018 -
Re: Teenagers in the workforce
Hi there! This is really good! It is informative, but not boring. It is interesting and you make the reader want to finish it. There is one thing I am ...
Nov 30, 2018 -
Re: An Intellectual Love
Hi there! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here! I love this poem! It is so true and so relatable, at least for me. For me, this is ...
Nov 30, 2018 -
Re: What Have We Done? - Lyrical Poem
Hi there! This is a really good poem! I don't have much to say, as this is a perfectly executed poem! It speaks right to the readers heart. The only ...
Nov 29, 2018 -
Re: Breakup
Hi there! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here. So this is not going to be much of a review, because.... I. LOVE. THIS. POEM!!! It speaks directly ...
Nov 29, 2018