FireSpyGirl

Hello @RavenBlack. So this is the first of your works I have read and reviewed. This was a very interesting script, definitely a good plot and well executed. Now, this ...

Hi there! This is definitely humorous, and I needed a laugh. Thank you so much! I love how you made a good plot and you wrote it out really well ...

Love it! Especially the ending! So cute!!! So the two other reviews already pointed everything out, so I'm afraid I don't have much to say. Sorry! I do love the ...

Hi there! This is a breathtaking poem! I love it! There are only a few things I am going to point out. Number one: "You bright up like the stars" ...

Great chapter! I am interested in seeing where this goes. Cass is a very interesting character, as is Kartiel. This....Darkness that Cass has is actually pretty cool. It reminds me ...

Great job! I'm just going to point out a few nitpicks, feel free to ignore them. :). First off, when everyone is at the conference, so to speak, you misspelled ...

Hi there! I know I'm kind of reviewing these chapters in the wrong order, I'm sorry about that. :). I like this chapter! Poor Carter, I really hope he turns ...

Hi there! This is a cute poem! It brought a smile to my face, which I needed, so thank you for that! The only thing I want to point out ...

Hi there! Another great chapter with a cliff hanger ending! I am excited and can't wait to see what happens! :). I don't really have much to say, because I ...

I am going to be waiting eagerly for Part 2!! I have to say that I NEVER saw this coming! I love being surprised like that when I read books, ...

*Bounces with excitement* I am really loving your novel! The plot is definitely intriguing and I am sooo hooked! XD. Each chapter that I have read is very well written, ...

Beautiful, amazing, awesome! Three words to describe this poem, which I love!! It is so very relatable! My favorite part....All of it! I just have one tip. "Allways" is actually ...

Hi there! Good Chapter, I am super excited!! Now, I'll jump right into this review! The only things I'm going to point out a few spelling errors, I hope you ...

Hi there! Another great chapter and I am soo hooked into your story! I believe that each chapter gets better! You have a great plot here, you write it out ...

Hi there! So this is a very interesting story. You have a really good plot, a good theme and you wrote this really well. The perfect amount of emotion in ...