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Hi, runawaylove! FireFox here to review your poem for the Apple Dumpling Gang! (Yes, that is our name!) I know this is quite a personal poem regarding your grandfather, so ...

Hey, ForgottenSpellbinder! FireFox here to review your piece for the Apple Dumpling Gang! (Yes, that is our name!) Needs Improvement: 1. Grammar. Though not really a big deal, because grammar ...

Hey, ancientforever! (I like your name, by the way.) FireFox here to review for the Apple Dumpling Gang! (Yes, that is our name!) Needs Improvement: 1. Grammar. I'm sure you ...

Hey, 567ajt! FireFox here, reviewing for the Apple Dumpling Gang! (Yes, that is our name!) Needs Improvement: 1. Grammar. I'm sure you are well aware that you have some grammar ...

Hi, MustLoveVampireCats! FireFox here to review your piece for the Apple Dumpling Gang! (Yes, that is our name!) Here we go! Needs Improvement: 1. Grammar/Spelling. I won't nitpick, as I ...

Hey, FatCowsSis! FireFox here to review your poem! I know you said this was for your dad, so I won't review it too seriously, but you did ask for a ...

Hey, Ary! FireFox here to review your piece! Needs Improvement: 1. Grammar. I saw no spelling issues, but I could have missed them, so you probably know it would be ...

Hi, Raven! FireFox here to review your poem! I see you have no reviews on it yet, so let me be the first to do so! Needs Improvement: 1. Grammar/spelling. ...

Hey, beccalicious! FireFox here to review your vignettes! To be quite honest, I'm not exactly sure how vignettes work, but you could reply to my review and enlighten me if ...

Hi, rishabh! I'm here to review your essay! I typically start with a few things that could use improvement to make your piece even more powerful, and I end my ...

Hey, defyingravity! Here to review your poem! I can't exactly say that I found any grammar/spelling mistakes, though those would be trivial things to point out in such a powerful ...

Hi, nanya! I typically am not a poetry person, nor do I like romantic prose and pieces, but I took a leap of faith on this one. I'm glad I ...

modernzombie, your title is what lured me to read this baby and review it, and I love it! Below, I will tell you things that I think would help you ...

Hey, here to do a review of this piece. I don't typically read, write, or review poetry, but I decided to take a chance and try it out. So, forgive ...

Hey there, EnigmaticSpirit! The title of this piece caught my eye and I decided to check it out! I'm glad I did! I'm going to assume that this is not ...