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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 5

    Hey, FireBird99 here for a review! Dragons

    Jun 9, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 4

    Hey! FireBird99 here for a review! Wow...this plot is original! Why have I not thought of an enchantress that turned people into sheep? xD. I want to know why Shep ...

    Jun 5, 2015
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Battle of Thermopylae, as told by Lycrus

    Hey! FireBird99 here for a review. Woah..I mean wow! That was a heck of a lot to read, but I made it! Good thing to because that ending was magnificent! ...

    Jun 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 3

    Hey! FireBird99 here for a review! ~What I liked- This is an amazing chapter, once again. The pacing was good. It didn't make me lose my focus. I love how ...

    Jun 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: High Wire

    Hey! FireBird99 here for a review! Woah, this is a really cool poem. It started out and I was thinking of all the difficulties in life that happens and that ...

    Jun 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 2

    Hey! FireBird99 here for a review! I think I may have just decided to adopt this novel. It is THAT interesting. ~What I liked- I found this Chapter was a ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Wool of the Prince-- Prologue and Chapter 1

    Hey! FireBird99 here for a review! I saw your way later chapters in the green room and figured that instead of jumping in at the near end of the book ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Secret of The Emerald: Chapter 2

    Hey! FireBird99 here for a review! So I am going to skip right in to Chapter 2 because its review day and we are suppose to clear out the Green ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Dual Identity - Chapter 2

    Hey! FireBird99 here for a review! This is a good chapter. I was a little sad that Paul wasn't all that sympathetic, but it makes the story interesting. Besides, you ...

    May 30, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: show me what it is to speak

    Hey, FireBird99 here for a review! I won't be much help with the critiquing of this poem. I can tell you that this poem was very unique in its own ...

    May 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Dual Identity - Chapter 1

    Hey! FireBird99 here for a review! So I am here as promised to review your work. Again this work was well written. It had more dialogue than your other one ...

    May 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Dual Identity - Prologue

    Hey! FireBird99 here to review your work! I saw Chapter 7 in the Green Room and I was in the mood of a novel that had a few chapters so ...

    May 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Arabian Dances

    Hey, FireBird99 here for a review! I really enjoyed this poem. You painted a clear picture of what was happening. The colors. The moves. The crowd. Awesome job! In a ...

    May 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Broken Guitar

    Hey, Rose! When I first read this song, I loved it! Considering I am learning the guitar, (as you well know...I think I broke your eardrums a few times :P) ...

    May 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Prologue

    Hey! FireBird99 here for a review! This is very interesting. I really enjoyed reading it. You've made me want more of this suspenseful, awesome prologue. I love how it turned ...

    May 19, 2015


Very well; I hear; I admit, but I have a voice too, and for good or evil mine is the speech that cannot be silenced.
— Joseph Conrad, Heart of Darkness