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  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: colors of the rainbow

    Hello, friend! Let's get into it! Okay, to start, I'm SO SO sad that I didn't see this sooner! I'm a tad late ( a tad late being 3 whole ...

    May 6, 2024
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A kind of loneliness

    Hello my fellow writer! Let's get started. Okay. So first off, I wanted to state how really impressively written this was! The metaphor of loneliness... very well done! You make ...

    May 5, 2024
  • Other » General, Romantic Re: Catching Feelings for Someone Who's Not Mine

    Hello, my fellow writer friend! Let's get started. Ah, what a heartfelt poem. It has a mixture of emotions. Love, warmth, unsteadiness, spite. I have similar experiences too! This is ...

    May 2, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Romantic Re: Everbound Prologue : Tapestries And Temptations.

    Hi Moonlily! Let's get started. First off, OHMYGOSHHOWISTHISSOGOODTHISISAMAZINGHOWHOWHOW!!!! *gasps for air* Ahem. I'm so honored that you dubbed me worthy of reviewing this masterpiece! ...this is a

    Apr 30, 2024
  • Other » General, Historical Fiction Re: February, 1775 – Scotchtown Plantation, Beaverdam, Virginia

    Hello, my friend! Wow, wow, wow. How you manage to write a beautiful story and keep it consistently entrancing the whole way, I will never know. This story is so ...

    Apr 27, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Fate

    Hello Kirti! Let's get into it! Woah. This is a very deep poem. I could feel the weight of it all with each line. I really liked this part: Maybe ...

    Apr 20, 2024
  • Poetry » Literature, Lyrical Re: No hope left to lose

    Hey, fellow writer! Let's get started! Wow, wow, wow. This poem strikes me very personally, because I struggle with similar issues. The meaning behind the poem is beautiful, and the ...

    Apr 20, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Gone Ghost

    Hello, fellow poet! Let's dive in! Ah, gosh. This is such a sad piece in a really touching way. I liked this line here: only here because i'm still incomplete. ...

    Apr 20, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Even the moon is eclipsed by the earth's shadow

    Me: uses google translate... realizes you included a translation ... *dies of the revelation of self dimness* Hello my friend! I can't write reviews half as good as yours, but ...

    Apr 20, 2024
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: There is no happily ever after

    Hi my friend! Let's get started! First off, I think this post is really underrated and you need more likes! This is really good. It made me feel warm and ...

    Apr 20, 2024
  • Article / Essay » Other, General Re: CO2

    Hey, Tambo! This is a review, so let's get into it! To start, I love how this article was short and sweet. Sometimes simpler is better than more complicated. Firstly, ...

    Apr 20, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Literature Re: Benji's Last Day

    Hello fellow writer! This was such a touching and beautiful story. I absolutely loved the similes you used to describe things. The wind traveled like a snake... Yes, the descriptions ...

    Apr 18, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: The Celestial Song

    Hello fellow writer! Let's get right into it! To start, I wanted to ask... WHY ARE YOU SO UNDERRATED?! THIS IS SO GOOD!!! Ahem. But seriously, this is REALLY fascinating! ...

    Apr 17, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Literature Re: .

    Hey, my fellow writer! Wow, wow, wow. You are such a talented writer. How you put variety in each character's personality is well done! Each individual has different character traits, ...

    Apr 17, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The origin of Anika

    Hello my fellow writer! I want to start by stating that this narrative is so intriguing. I love how you built up the suspense! A good writer knows how to ...

    Apr 16, 2024


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