FazoliMoli123

thank you guys so much for all the comments! :]

Completely relateable :] Ive been there and i've felt the pain of falling for a friend, and this poem pretty much sums it up! Great job! I really like how ...

I really like this! Just like behindthemask said, you said what others are afraid to. I really do like this poem! especially the first stanza, thats what drew me in. ...

Thank you for the revieww :] i'll add more feeling next time!! and sorry for the sadness :'[

Thanks, both of you for the reviews!!! it really is helping!! i'm trying to put it into what i write next :] thank you so much!!

Thanks guys. I'll make sure i don't post love ones. hhaha, unless they are amazing... or i think possibly they could be okay! but thank you :]

Aww thanks everyone :]. i'll look for a musician, and try to fix up my punctuation and capitalization. but thank you, TONS!!

FLyerS: why would you shank me for writing a love poem!??! and lol thanks for not doing so! Animia: thanks :] and i guess we do all have different tastes. ...

Thanks to both of you :]. I'll fix the rhythm and the grammar next time. But thank you guys :]

thank youuu!!! :]

oh thanks alot! ill work on the rhyme and stuff. but thank you! :]

ah!! first review!! thank you so much!!! i'll try to fix it!! thank you thoo :] ill put it into shorter chunkies and tell ya when its up and running. ...

aaww its so sad!! but so good!!! and hahaha my sisters bf's name is ian!! lol

Oh My Gosh. I LOVE your story!!! when are you going to update it?? message me back. I Love it!1 and wanna figure out what happends at the park!!