FatCowsSis

Hey TJ! Sis here for a review for you (as promised)! The world is a busy place, always moving, always changing. Throughout the ages it has transformed, sometimes for the ...

Hey Roundsquare, Sis here to review, Alright, so overall I think this was a really good idea. I think I know what you were trying to get across but the ...

Hey TJ! Sis here for a review! First off, this a really great poem! I loved the concept of it! Now for the content itself: The clothes are tattered and ...

But. You. No! You can't leave it like that! *cries in a corner* Okay, so obviously, I'm addicted. This is amazing, and, wow. I'm speechless right now. I love your ...

Okay, so I'm addicted. At the beginning, I find it kind of weird the Daniel instantly figured out that she was Egyptian. Shouldn't it have taken some time? How did ...

Hey again! Yes, I realize that all these reviews are late, but it is review day! Alright, this was shorter, and that's nice. I like how you kept the differences ...

Heyheyhey Basil! Alright, so first of all, this is a really interesting story line. I love how you changed most people's view on hell, so that's nice. Also, you combined ...

Hey blimeylimey217, I want to start off with one word: WOW! This is amazing! I can tell that you wrote this with emotion! Now, off to the poem: My heart ...

Hey ShadowVyper! Here's that promised review! Okay, so I didn't review your first one, and I decided that I would heap both of them together into one. :3 So, here ...

Hey SecreteJournalist! So, I read this a few days ago and decided to wait until review day to give you this review! Alright, so first of all, I must say ...

Hey SecreteJournalist, I know you said to try and guess the meaning, so I'm going to say maybe you feel like you're trapped. And escape in this case means death. ...

Hey fortis! Three lines can certainly have a lot of meaning, can't they? Okay, so haikus aren't really my strong point, but I'm here to review anyway. Okay, so first ...

Finally! Here comes that promised review!! I wanted to be happy I wanted to let things be I wanted you to be around I wanted you with me I wanted ...

Hey Harshita, Wow. This was amazing! Probably one of the only things I can say is that I noticed that in the fourth stanza you didn't capitalize the t in ...

Hey rothwise! First of all, great title! I looked at it and saw that it would probably fit to my liking! So, I read it out saw that it didn't ...