FatCowsSis

Hello there! It's getting a bit late on my side of the globe, so I apologize if this reviews seems scatterbrained, or if it just makes no sense at all. ...

Hello! Wow. I'm completely captivated so far by this story. I would like to warn you that I'm rubbish at reviewing novels, but I have decided to give it a ...

Why hello there! I have arrived to review this 2nd part of a chapter :D I would like to mention in advance that I typically do not read and review ...

Hello! Right. So, I had every intention of reviewing this stunning poem earlier, but I accidentally exited out of the tab, and it took me FOREVER to find this again. ...

I've made it to Chapter Six! I'm going to agree with everything King mentioned. I too noticed the peculiar spelling during this sentence: She starred at her phone for a ...

Hello there! Chapter Five! I'm practically oozing with excitement! Let's get on to it! (have you noticed these opening things are getting shorter and shorter?) This was a rather humorous ...

Hello again! I'm thrilled to return to you with another review! Once again, I ask that you pardon my ignorance. Alright, now. On with the review! Time was running out, ...

Hello! You have requested a review, and I am here to deliver! I may have read ahead one chapter, but I assure you that I will keep my comments related ...

Hello there! I have arrived to review this beautiful work. I must say, I was a bit confused initially while reading, but you certainly cleared up my confusion as I ...

Hello Flyway! I am here, as you likely assumed, to review this lovely piece if literature. So without further ado, let's begin! Okay, so first off. This story started off ...

Hello Keepwriting! First of all, I want to thank you, because this poem literally made me burst out laughing. Well done. As far as criticism goes, there isn't much I ...

Hey waningwriter. I would like to point out that I do not intend any ill will in this review. While I don't have many "negative" things to say, I do ...

Hello! I'm here to review for you! First of all, I love the story. It's beautiful and the concept is absolutely amazing. Although a bit cliche, you made it in ...

Hello! First off, I want to say that instead of having to put little stars in between every stanza if you hold down Shift+Enter, it does't skip lines like that.... ...

Hey!! So, as much as I love this poem, everything has its flaws, yes? So, nitpicks: First off, RHYME. In your first stanza you rhyme hear and clear , but ...