FatCowsSis

Hello there! First off, I would like to commend you on a very intriguing story. I simply could not stop reading! You mentioned how you wanted to cut out about ...

Hello there once again! I apologize for the delay in my review. As school comes to a close I have less and less time to get on YWS. Darn exams. ...

Hello!! First of all, I was not notified of this chapter, which makes me feel TERRIBLE for taking this long to review! But, better late than never, so here I ...

Hello there! I am SOO sorry for the delay in this review! I've been completely swamped, but I'm here now! Once again, you have tugged at my heart and made ...

Why hello! Fancy meeting you here... Chapter Eight!!! I believe we are both familiar with my reviewing "style", so let us begin. The fringed rug gentle tickled the underneath of ...

IT'S HERE!! I am filled to the brim with joy right now!! Alright, now let's get on with the review :P I must admit, I was a bit confused when ...

Hello there! I particularly enjoyed this poem; however, I have a couple of things to mention. Notice that the same thing was written there? Twice? When you have this sort ...

Hello there! I really enjoyed reading this poem, however there are a couple of things I would like to mention pertaining to editing in the future. Let's jump into it! ...

Hello there! I arrived arrived to review this beautiful poem! My first impression of this poem was that you excel at rhyme. However, I did notice that the cost of ...

Hello there! It makes me sad that you aren't planning on continuing this story line. It has the potential to be really good. Now, I would like to apologize in ...

Hello! Round 3! Let's get in the drill. Once again, watch the possessive forms when referencing people. I don't see the need to quote that, as I've done so in ...

Hello once again! I have once again returned to "review" some art interpretations. Same plan as last time? Alright, so I noticed a couple common grammatical errors between the two ...

Hello there! I'll be quite honest, that was rather enlightening. Thank you so much. I'm not quite sure how to review a piece like this, so I believe all I ...

Hello there! I have returned! Once again, this was a very intriguing chapter. Let's jump into the review, shall we? Grammar/Spelling: You have relatively good grammar for being 14. There ...

Hello there! I have arrived to review this second chapter of Invincible. I apologize for not reviewing the Prologue and Chapter 1, but I figured a review would be better ...