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  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Science Fiction
    Re: Hoth Echo Base: Barely Survived Without You

    Hello there! First off, I would like to commend you on a very intriguing story. I simply could not stop reading! You mentioned how you wanted to cut out about ...

    May 28, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: Chicago Chapter 11

    Hello there once again! I apologize for the delay in my review. As school comes to a close I have less and less time to get on YWS. Darn exams. ...

    May 27, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic
    Re: Chicago Chapter 10

    Hello!! First of all, I was not notified of this chapter, which makes me feel TERRIBLE for taking this long to review! But, better late than never, so here I ...

    May 23, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: Chicago Chapter 9

    Hello there! I am SOO sorry for the delay in this review! I've been completely swamped, but I'm here now! Once again, you have tugged at my heart and made ...

    May 11, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: Chicago Chapter 8

    Why hello! Fancy meeting you here... Chapter Eight!!! I believe we are both familiar with my reviewing "style", so let us begin. The fringed rug gentle tickled the underneath of ...

    May 7, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: Chicago Chapter 7

    IT'S HERE!! I am filled to the brim with joy right now!! Alright, now let's get on with the review :P I must admit, I was a bit confused when ...

    May 1, 2016

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other
    Re: Appreciation of apekind

    Hello there! I particularly enjoyed this poem; however, I have a couple of things to mention. Notice that the same thing was written there? Twice? When you have this sort ...

    May 1, 2016

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Why Do I Want What's Bad For Me

    Hello there! I really enjoyed reading this poem, however there are a couple of things I would like to mention pertaining to editing in the future. Let's jump into it! ...

    May 1, 2016

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual
    Re: If I Could Fly

    Hello there! I arrived arrived to review this beautiful poem! My first impression of this poem was that you excel at rhyme. However, I did notice that the cost of ...

    May 1, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Purgatory

    Hello there! It makes me sad that you aren't planning on continuing this story line. It has the potential to be really good. Now, I would like to apologize in ...

    May 1, 2016

  • Art » Review, General
    Re: 1981 - Peter Booth

    Hello! Round 3! Let's get in the drill. Once again, watch the possessive forms when referencing people. I don't see the need to quote that, as I've done so in ...

    May 1, 2016

  • Art » Review, General
    Re: 1977 Peter Booth Analysis

    Hello once again! I have once again returned to "review" some art interpretations. Same plan as last time? Alright, so I noticed a couple common grammatical errors between the two ...

    May 1, 2016


  • Hello there! I'll be quite honest, that was rather enlightening. Thank you so much. I'm not quite sure how to review a piece like this, so I believe all I ...

    Apr 30, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Invincible Chapter Three

    Hello there! I have returned! Once again, this was a very intriguing chapter. Let's jump into the review, shall we? Grammar/Spelling: You have relatively good grammar for being 14. There ...

    Apr 30, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Invincible Chapter Two

    Hello there! I have arrived to review this second chapter of Invincible. I apologize for not reviewing the Prologue and Chapter 1, but I figured a review would be better ...

    Apr 30, 2016


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