Faery007

I love this a lot, it touched a theme that I am personally very passionate about and write about myself. I had 2-3 favourite lines but overall it was very ...

This is sweet :) Now, I don't want to be harsh, but a few tweeks, 'Im' should be 'I'm' or 'I am' 'Me' doesn't need a capital letter. 'i' , ...

This is really nice. The fact that the semantics are so complex but that I contrasted by the simplified narration just makes it really easy to read and there is ...

I love this. 20 like and only 2 comments!? Well, I think I will be changing that! I actually like the ambiguity and the structure is very tastefully done. The ...

I didn't think it was at all terrible! If fact, with a little refining and practice, this could be quite excellent. The idea that you have has great potential to ...

I liked this. Maybe it was just me but I found it obvious that it was a same-sex paring. It was sensitive and done in a mature manner. The grammar ...

In all honesty, I loved this. Your style, your punctuation, your semantics. It was all so beautiful. I really wish that I would have written a poem like this. It ...

Hiya, I won't be reviewing this fully but I HAD to comment! This is such a lovely poem..I read it twice because I wished I would have wrote it myself! ...

Hiya, This poem had a really great concept. You told it in a very clear tone, and the style was so simple which made it easy to read and the ...

Hiya, This poem had a really great concept. You told it in a very clear tone, and the style was so simple which made it easy to read and the ...

Hiya, I just thought I'd say, I loved the idea of this, very clever! You should make it longer, and OMG sequels! They could fall in love, or be brother ...

Hiya, I like this a lot, it was really nice. You should make it longer, and add some more emotive language to it. I love te way you use the ...

Hiya, This is great. I love how you handled a sensitive topic in a mature way. how the men at the pool molested the grass This is beautiful, you've captured ...

Hiya, I love this poem, its so cute! I read it over a few times and your grammer is very good. It has a really cute bouncy flow and you ...

Hiya, So, I really liked this, it was sort of fun and slightly sad at the same time. I like the idea of it, and if you keep working on ...