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All that and I've fallen spectacularly behind... Nit-picks and nice moments: Your third paragraph is delightful. Perfect pacing and sensory details, as well as nice bits of description that don't ...

Biscuits thinks to themselves: I wonder if I'll do another review before bed. Biscuits reads first paragraph: Oops I'm already reviewing in my mind. Nit-picks: it wasn't actually that far ...

Heyo, I'm here to get my RevMo started off to a non-pathetic start (as in, doing at least one review on the first day). Nit-picks: so out of touch with ...

Hey, this isn't going to be particularly long because I did say a fair bit of what I wanted to say on your document. (Also apologies if I do repeat ...

Hihihihi sorry this took so long. Nit-picks and nice moments: in the weeks following her departure from Merdon. Is that her home? I'm not actually sure I've heard it mentioned ...

Neeeearly there. Nit-picks and nice moments: Whatever. Ellipse was perfectly innocent. I think I've said this before but I think thoughts should be in italics. (The "Whatever" here). The specifus’s ...

In possibly the weirdest reason to review anything ever, the show I'm watching is buffering so I'm letting it load til I've finished this :P everyone was eager to see ...

Wrecktrix’s room had been designed with sleep in mind. YES! Oh, Wrecktrix, I've missed you buddy. and currently across Ellipse’s chest and legs. Oh. Well, good to get some setting ...

Ellipse figured she ought to take on real captain duties A-ha! So it is just them! “Focci,” she sang, “I brought food.” He grunted at her Since it seems to ...

Hey there, welcome to the first in a long string of slightly hasty Review Day reviews! I apologise for any spelling errors that occur but hopefully I'll be able to ...

gogogogogo nit-picks: In the corner, a dark figure sat huddled. She inched her way toward it. She crouched and reached out her hand. The sentence structure of X did action ...

Hey, just dropping by while I wait for my friends to show up for an RPG session :P Nit-picks and nice moments: his wheelchair just barely squeezing through the aisle ...

Hey, here just in time for my review of the day ^.^ Nit-picks and nice moments: I was raised as though belief-clashing wasn’t a thing This seems a bit informal ...

Heyo, Nit-picks: groaning when she could barely see the sun peeking above the horizon "when" is a bit clunky here. "It is a long journey," Yuni retorted. "I was perhaps ...

Yaaay I finished all my green room reviews so I can review this now! Nit-picks and nice moments: very muscular earthling man shot out from nowhere I've more often heard ...