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  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Flashbacks: prologue

    Hello, Cass! I am here to review your story as you requested! Now, before I begin I will tell you a bit about how I review... I tend to point ...

    Sep 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 5

    Hey, Noelle! Time for another review! Now, since it has been two days since my last review, I shall leave you with another one! (Hopefully you will see this when ...

    Sep 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Magic Survives Chapter 1: The Fables

    Hey, GreenTulip! I'm here for another review while I'm waiting to go to the library! :D I hope this review somehow helps you with writing! Same as last time, I'm ...

    Sep 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Magic Survives- Prologue

    Hello! I am your novel's parent ready here to review! (Just letting you know, I read and review at the same time. So, read one paragraph, review. :D ) Now, ...

    Sep 24, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 4

    Hey, Noelle! The last review I gave you was fewer than forty eight hours ago! So... that's good, right? So... I think I spoiled the ship for myself, so... that ...

    Sep 24, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 3 Part 2

    Hey, Noelle! I am here to review your story again... Wow, it's been a while, hasn't it? Over ten days... I'm sowwy, I'll catch up. Promise. (Warning, this may not ...

    Sep 22, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: A Spark in the Cold Darkness

    Hey, sis! I am here to attempt to give a review to your story! Ah, well... I'm not sure how to go about this, so I guess I'll just start ...

    Sep 22, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Action / Adventure Re: memorizer part I

    Hello, misschavoshi! I am here to review your horror story! So, let's begin... Now, I am not one for reviewing horror, so excuse me if this is not the best ...

    Sep 21, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Battle. Chapter 8

    Hey, dogrule! I am here to review this awesome chapter! What I first noticed when reading your chapter is that this is in the 3rd person. Now, reading through the ...

    Sep 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: a long wait

    Hello, miley! Raven here to review your poem! Now, this is better than the last poem! It's short and sweet, and the best part: it rhymes! Some people may not ...

    Sep 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 3 Part 1

    Hi, Noelle! I'm here to feed your novel a like and give it a review! (Speaking of feeding novels likes, I should go back and like the last one.) Okay, ...

    Sep 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 2

    Hey, Noelle! Your novel's parent here ready to feed it a like and give it a review! (Just wondering, would you like me to refer to your novel as it? ...

    Sep 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 1

    I am tired and on my phone writing this. I apologize if this makes zero sense at all. Hey, Noelle! Raven here to review this wonderful novel. Let's forget that ...

    Sep 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fanfiction Re: ZRAC: Prologue

    Hello, Zhia! I am here to review ZRAC! Now, I hope I've improved in reviewing since I reviewed ZAAC so I can give you better feedback! I am sorry if ...

    Sep 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: If I'm Worth It

    Hello! Raven here to give a review! I love the name that the character has. It's so unique and special. Even though Karah does not feel loved, her name mean ...

    Sep 5, 2014


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