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Re: Trying: Chapter 6.1
Hey, Gretel! Raven here to review your work... for the first time ever. I think. I might have reviewed your stuff before. However, let's just save this moment, alright? This ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Body in the Woods
Hello, Nightling! Raven here for a review! Woah there! That's quite a long piece! I agree with Iggy and EmeraldEyes, it would be easier to review this if it was ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Untitled(Fanfic): Character Sheet: Eryka Presley
Hello, Cryaotic! Raven here for a review! Happy Review Day! Also, HAPPY BELATED WELCOME TO THE SITE! Now that, that's out of the way... onto the review! :D One of ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Quest of the Three Lambs-Chapter 2
Hey, Waffle! Raven here for a review! I have scanned through the first chapter, and I must say: I like the story! However, I might be a bit ignorant considering ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Network of Keys Chapter 9 part 3; Ky, A Jump
Hello, Rainbow! Raven here for a review. I'm sorry but I haven't read the previous chapters yet, so if I seem ignorant I apologize. The first part of the story ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: For Raven
Hey, Gretel! Raven here for a review- this actually might be a comment. I'm not sure yet! A lot of people are waiting for me to say what I think ...
Oct 22, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 3.2 Girl
Hey, Timmy! Ehem, no I did not forget about your novel... I totally didn't forget. However, I am here now and I am going to review it! One that reminds ...
Oct 21, 2014 -
Re: I luv u le sparkilievampie
Hello, Katgirl! I saw this a few days ago and said, "I'm going to review it." So, here I am. Before beginning this, I would like to say a few ...
Oct 20, 2014 -
Re: Mediated Thought
Hello, Aley! Raven here for a review as requested. Now I am sorry if this does meet your poetry reviewing standards; I do not review much poetry. So... let's begin. ...
Oct 19, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 9
Hey, Noelle. Raven here for a review! Well, look at that; I'm back within a reasonable amount of time! So, let me see what you have done to torture your ...
Oct 15, 2014 -
Re: The Ring i found next to a yellow sea
Hello, Spenser! Raven here for a review! Now, I am sorry if I seem harsh at all; that is not my intention. I only want to make you a better ...
Oct 13, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 3.1 Girl
Salutations, Timmy! Raven is here to review chapter three of this story! Your novels parent here in a reasonable time frame! Haha. Now, let's get onto the review, shall we? ...
Oct 12, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 8
Hello, Noelle! I am here to give you a (hopefully) helpful review! Hm... Zeke is travelling by himself... What's the reason? Is he afraid of Akia? Or does could give ...
Oct 10, 2014 -
Re: Magic Survives: Chapter 2- Monsters in the dark
'ello, GreenTulip. Long time, no see. I'm a little sorry for taking a long break. I promise, I'm back now and I'm ready to review! Well, that was one interesting ...
Oct 10, 2014 -
Re: clouded part one
Greetings, Free! I am Raven ready to give you a review! Before I begin, I would like to say: WELCOME TO YWS. I hope you will have a long and ...
Oct 9, 2014