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Re: The Battle Chapter 10
Hello, dogsrule! Adrian back here for another review! "Now soldiers. Listen up" Chief said sounding angry. "The war is almost over, but I do expect you to still be on ...
Jan 20, 2015 -
Re: The Battle Chapter 9
Hello, dogsrule5! I am RavenMoonStone, the person who had been reviewing all the previous chapters. :P Anyways, I got my name changed, and I'm here to review chapter 9 and ...
Jan 20, 2015 -
Re: Untitled
Hey, Jazzy. Never fear, Adrian is here for a review! You requested for me to review this a few days ago, so I'm finally here to deliver it! ...and tomorrow ...
Jan 19, 2015 -
Re: and the dream comes true.....not
Hello, siyasingh! I'm Adrian, and I'm here to deliver a review to you. Now, before we begin I would like to warn you that I do have a tendency to ...
Jan 14, 2015 -
Re: Michael Clifford
Hello, Spliff! Never fear, Adrian is here for a review! Now, this is a short work, but there are certain things I would like to point out in this! So, ...
Jan 13, 2015 -
Re: The Spasmodic Rodent
Hello, Link! I am here to deliver a poetry review as you have requested. Now, I'm sorry if this is not very good. For I don't review poetry often and ...
Jan 5, 2015 -
Re: Invitation of a Heart
Hey, Linkzude16! Never fear, Raven is here to deliver the review you had requested in my forum! I'm sorry it has taken me so long to get to this, for ...
Jan 1, 2015 -
Re: Little Sister Chapter 2 [EDITED]
Hey, Mem! Raven here for a review! This is mostly going to go into nitpicks! So, let's begin. One of the first things that I notice is that there is ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Magic Realm- It's the start.
Hey, Hope! Never fear, Raven is here! :P I am here to deliver a special review just for you on this fine Review Day! So sit back, relax and read. ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Little Sister chapter 1 EDITED
Hey, Mem!
Dec 23, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 3.3 Girl
Hey, Timmy! I haven't review Affinity in a long while. Welp, here I am. I'm not quite sure how I feel about this chapter. It is good, but not as ...
Dec 22, 2014 -
Re: Sage and The Sick-O's// Chapter Four
Hi, Kitty! Never fear, Raven is here (for a review)! I have not read the previous chapters, so I am sorry if this does not make any sense. However-- enough ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Frozen hope- Chapter 4
Hey, EPIC! Raven here for a review! I have reviewed a work of yours before, but I haven't read Frozen Hope! So, here I am. :D Brief warning: I have ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: [reworking ch. 1
Hiya, Chummy! I'm Raven here to give you a review! Though, I must warn you: I haven't done much reviewing, so I might be a bit rusty! (I did have ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: In all weathers-01 Prologue
Salutations, Rinkaku! Raven here for the After Watch! :D I'm sorry if I seem harsh at all during any part of this review; I just got up and am really ...
Oct 27, 2014