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Re: Chapter 1(Empty Vessel)
Hello, ka67! Never fear, for Adrian is here to give a review! The dream start really throws me off, and I'm not sure how to feel about it. Beginnings like ...
Mar 5, 2015 -
Re: Deleted
Greetings, Ice! Never fear, Adrian is here for a Review Day review! I represent team Blue's Clues and I am here to review your work. (I have not read any ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: o.c. short ?
Salutations, sunflowerr! Adrian is here to deliver a review. I must say that I really do not like that beginning. Stories that start with everything about the main character being ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Cursed Water (HP Fanfic)
Hey, Dracula. Never fear, Adrian is here for a Review Day review. :P I am a huge Harry Potter fan, and I am also a huge fanfic fan. So I ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Same Old Poverty
Hello, FromWithin! Never fear, Adrian is here to give a review. :P I shall be reviewing as I read, so be warned. Now, let us commence the review. Oh wow. ...
Feb 16, 2015 -
Re: The hero of earth chapter 5
Hey, Dragon. Never fear, Adrian is here to deliver a review. I haven't read the previous chapters, so I'm sorry if some of this doesn't make sense. Anyways, onward with ...
Feb 16, 2015 -
Re: And the dream comes true......not chapter 4
Hey, Siya! Adrian here to review another chapter of your novel. This is a good chapter! The reader now sort of knows what is going on. The main character is ...
Feb 11, 2015 -
Re: And the dream comes true.........not chapter:3
Hello, Siya! Never fear, Adrian is here to review another chapter of your wonderful story. As I have said before, I do have the tendency to be harsh, bla bla ...
Feb 1, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 4.2 Avery
Hey, Timmy! Never fear, Adrian is here for their 150th review. I'm finally back in a timely manner. I do like Avery in this chapter. While being annoying by interrupting ...
Jan 30, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 10
Hey, Noelle! Never fear, Adrian is here for a review. Let's just forget that I haven't reviewed this in a long while. Aww, poor Akia. Her past is being brought ...
Jan 30, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 4.1 Avery
Hey, Timmy! Adrian here for a review. Let's just forget that I have not reviewed this in a long while. Shall we? So, we finally learn more about her and ...
Jan 28, 2015 -
Re: The Battle Chapter 11
Hello, dogsrule! Adrian here to deliver a review! Woah, another chapter. I am so happy! WE finally get to see more about Amber and her life at the boarding school! ...
Jan 27, 2015 -
Re: Dual Identity - Chapter 3
Hello, Raging! Adrian here for a review! I haven't read the previous chapters. So I apologize if I don't make sense on some things. I must say, this is an ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: And the dream comes true......not- chapter:2
Hello, siyasingh! I reviewed your last chapter, so I thought I would review this one! As I have said, I do have a tendency to be harsh, so I apologize. ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1 flashback
Hello, Madshein! I'm Adrian, and I'm here to review Chapter 1 of your story! I apologize if anything in this review is harsh, I am really tired. I saw that ...
Jan 25, 2015