Evander

Hey, Barcodes! First of all, here's a belated welcome to YWS! I saw your activity in the Resources forum and I think that's really neat. Alright, onto the review! Throughout ...

Heyo, Godfreys! I'm here from my WRFF thread. Sorry about the long wait! I'm going to preface my review with this: I'm not familiar with the time period of this ...

Heyo, elysian! Here's my last review for you today!  I feel like Indiana has always had a love/hate relationship with our job.  This is another one of those things where ...

Heyo, elysian! I'm here for another review. The sun shining on the back of my eyelids was a fiery orange and the air was full of hints of lavender and ...

Heyo, elysian! I'm back with another quick review. Once again, I apologize if I repeat points already mentioned in previous reviews. Even with his caring for Kaydence, I still primarily ...

Heyo, elysian! I'm here for the review that you requested! I apologize if I end up repeating any advice that was mentioned in previous reviews. The introduction feels very... tell-y. ...

Heyo, Quinine! I'm back for another quick review~ Despite my amount of criticism, I really am a huge fan of this story and I can't wait to see where it ...

Heyo, Quinine! I read this story when it was first published, so I thought I would come back and leave it a review. I first want to say that I ...

Heyo, Hatt! Apologies if this review is a tad bit incoherent. I'm... very, very sleepy. But hey, I'm also your Ally :P Dale sat across from him, leaning back in ...

Heyo, Hattman! I'm here for my 300th review! Okay, the first thing that I have to say is that I really like your beginning paragraph. It flows really well, the ...

Heyo, Prachi! I saw your post in the General Request Repository, so I thought I'd stop in for a quick Tuesday morning review! I've read the previous chapters, so I'm ...

Heyo, FantasyWriter! I'm here for a review, just as promised. I caught up on the previous installments, so my review will be commenting on what I've seen in the past ...

Heyo, Katnes! I'm Evander here for a quick review. The first thing that I noticed is that the paragraphs are long . Long paragraphs can make it difficult for the ...

Heyo, Hatt! If you have any questions regarding this review or you just want to talk about this story with me, then feel free to send me a question on ...

Heyo, Dreaming! I'm here for a quick 1am review! Let's get started, shall we? With the main character's name being Elsa and Jack being Jack Frost, that leads me to ...