Evander

Hey, sull191! I saw chapter two in the Green Room, so I thought I'd go over and review chapter one first. Let's start with the beginning. Hi, my name is ...

Hey, Dogsrule! Adrian back with another review! I was in the Dragon's land with Peter. Unless the setting had changed, there would probably be little reason to restate where the ...

Hey, Dogsrule! Adrian back with another review. It's almost two a.m. and I'm writing by the light of a singular lamp. Let's do this. To be honest, I feel like ...

Hey, Wolfe. It's been a while. Honestly, I feel like the first part of this could be cut or at least condensed down to a few paragraphs. After reading the ...

Hey, dogsrule! Adrian is here for another review. I apologize if this doesn't make much sense, I've been rather scattered so most of my thoughts are hard to actually write ...

Hey, dogsrule! Adrian back for another review. Let's do this. I guess most of this review consists of the word "why". There are many questions that this introduction raises and ...

Hey, Dogsrule! Adrian here to review as requested. Sorry it took so long to finally get around to this. Life got in the way. But nevertheless, I'm finally here! In ...

Hey, Theresa! Adrian here for a review. Now, I haven't written one in quite a while so I may be a little rusty at this. Anyway, on with the show! ...

Hello! Adrian here for a review. First of all, the beginning didn't quite hook me in. There are several thousands of stories that start with the main character waking up, ...

Hey, Wolfe! I'm back to review your chapter, again [Insert long apology about how I'm sorry that I haven't been able to review this sooner.) On with the review~ Anyway, ...

Hey, Wolfe~ I apologize if this review doesn’t make much sense – I’ve been up since five a.m. and my brain is literal mush. So I don’t have much to ...

Finally, after a long wait, I am here. (If this has any typos, then blame it on tired Adri. Man, I am yawning so much right now.) Here's the thing: ...

Hey, Wolfe~ So uh, I really like this chapter. It moves us forward, even if it's in a small way. And the Puppet is mentioned~ So yeah, this chapter is ...

Hey! I have not read the reviews, so I’m sorry if any feedback has already been stated. Since I see that this has a prologue, I’ll be talking mostly about ...

Hey, Ice! I'm here to review your chapter for Review Day! I could not find the other chapters to review, but I have a general gist of the plot while ...