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Re: The Tower's Magic ― Chapter Five
Hi! Long time no see, Evvy! (My. bad. sorry...) This chapter was amazing! Don't worry about it getting worse, cause it's not. My advice on that would be to try ...
Nov 2, 2015 -
Re: The Tower's Magic ― Chapter Four
Hey! Sorry I couldn't get to you sooner. I'm having internet problems right now, so just bear with me. anyway, review time. Things I Liked The tests are really interesting. ...
Oct 16, 2015 -
Re: The Tower's Magic ― Chapter Three
Hey, LadyEvvy I'm (finally) here to review! I'm doing this on my dad's phone right now, so sorry about any typos. Things I liked really like where your taking this. ...
Oct 10, 2015 -
Re: The Tower's Magic ― Chapter Two
Hi! TheFantasy14 here! I told you I'd be back... *Ahem* Sorry. Review. Things I liked I'm really liking this other character (Let's call her She-Who-Will-Not-Be Named, shall we?) She seemed ...
Oct 8, 2015 -
Re: The Tower's Magic ― Chapter One
Howdy! TheFantasy14 Here! Glad to meet you! I'll star with the things I liked. Yuor style was great, and your writing flowed very nicely. I like both your characters, and ...
Oct 6, 2015 -
Re: The New Generation--Chapter 6: Weapons... Maybe Not a Good Idea
Hello! TheFantasy14 (Again) Here for a review! Reading about Leo made me feel pretty great. I love that you include cannon characters in your fanfic because it maked us PJO/Heroes ...
Oct 6, 2015 -
Re: The New Generation--Chapter Five: Going on a Quest
Hi there. TheFantasy14 for a review. Your characters and plat continue to develop nicely, and I like where your heading with this. One thing I would like to point out, ...
Oct 6, 2015 -
Re: The New Generation--Chapter 4: Something's Wrong...
Hey! TheFantasy14 here! Better late than never, right?... Anyway, review. I liked this one a lot. Bianca's character interests me, just be carefull and try not to make her too ...
Oct 5, 2015 -
Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 3
Heya! TheFantasy14 here for a review! I loved how you incorperated your characters backstory and appearance into the story. That's really hard to do in first person. I'm really liking ...
Oct 2, 2015 -
Re: The Revolution Begins
Great job! This is very interesting, I cant wait to read more! I got a little confused when you said they all shared the same body, but they were seperate. ...
Sep 28, 2015 -
Re: Young Justice: Beast Boy's Christmas Part One.
Hey! TheFantasy14 here! I love young justice, and I thought this fanfiction was very well done. Beast Boy's personality and character I was glad to see you kept the same, ...
Sep 28, 2015 -
Re: Your Disease
Hayah! TheFantasy14 here for a review. This piece was very well written and i could feel the emotion you put into it. good job. I did feel at times that ...
Sep 18, 2015 -
Re: Paper Planes (Ch1)
Hey there! This is TheFantsy14 here for a review! I liked the plot a whole lot. It was very eerie with a slight element of mystery that left me wanting ...
Sep 18, 2015 -
Re: What is Love?
Heyah! This is TheFantasy14! And since you're pretty new, welcome to the site! I really love the spirituality of your story, David's faith is especially strong and I, being a ...
Sep 17, 2015 -
Re: Heartlines
Hey there! TheFantasy14 here for a review! I loved your characters, they seem realistic, though I haven't had much time to really connect with any of them. I am excited ...
Sep 16, 2015
