Europa

Hi! So. First of all. I like the concept. You had a few pretty great images and a lot of great descriptions. You did a great job bringing each scene ...

Hello! Europa here which you can see by the name I'm reviewing poetry now, I guess. *ahem* this is funny because it's written in poetic line. So! You've definitely checked ...

Man...I haven't done this in ages. Well, here goes. Errie here for a review! I did enjoy reading this very much. I can totally relate to your main character's awkwardness, ...

Hey! Era here for a Review! Other than the sentence errors already mentioned in previous reviews, I only have two bits of advice to give. (1) Try not to tell ...

Hey there. Fantasy here for a review! I really liked that you used second person point of view, since that isn't something you see very often in a book. The ...

Hi there! Fantasy here to review! I really like the concept you have here. I love reading things like this and I like your main character so far. there are ...

Hiya! Sorry for the late reply. (Better late than never, right?...heh heh...) Anyway, review. I thought this was really good! I like the concept you have going on, and am ...

Hey there, DeathPrince! I'm TheFantasy14. Welcome to YWS! First off, I really like the plot you have going on already. I'm looking forward to learning more about your characters life ...

Hey! I haven't done this in a while, so just bear with me as I most likely say something completely idiotic. So first off, the characters. I liked Milo from ...

Hey there, stranger! I'm TheFantasy14! Hello and welcome to Young Writers Society! Let us start off with the compliments. Always best to start off positive, right? First of all, I ...

Heya! TheFantasy14 here to review. Okay, I suppose I'm correct in assuming that this is only the synopsis, right? So I can't really do much critiquing on characters or plot ...

Awwwwww! This was adorable! Hi, I'm TheFantasy14. Anyway, I liked this a lot. Your characters are vivid and believable, And I just love the relationship between them. You say this ...

Okay, first of all, I was going to wait until I was caught up to review, but as you can see from the numerous projects I have going on, I'm ...

Hey! It's TheFantasy14 here to review! The first thing I want to say is... Woah. And I repeat. WOAH. This story is already amazing! I love reading things like this, ...

Hi there Kratos! I'm TheFantasy14! Welcome to the site! I'm excited to see you're already diving into YWS life. Ah, yes I remember when I signed up... *Gazes off into ...