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Re: The Terrible Youth of Freznel: 20
"Yelled sweetly" was to show that her voice was sweet even when she yelled. Kappa had to feed her because, as I mentioned, the chapatis were too hard to break ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: The Terrible Youth of Freznel: 19
Hmm...I wasn't knowing about the CPR and the Coroners thingies...but, yes, I will just edit these things. And...yes, the characters. The characters here are all tall and look almost similar. ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: The Rule Of The Alien Queen...(4)
Thank you so much for the review, Tsunami! I includded the pics here because I wanted to show that these were thepics shown in the T.V. I wanted the reader ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: The Rule Of The Alien Queen...(4)
Hmm...exactly! This is what I was trying to say, Dracula! I am glad that you liked it. Thank you so much for the review and it helped me to correct ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: A Denial Not by One Own Self
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Jun 26, 2016
Hello there, Lightsong!! This is Eros here to write a review for this beautiful piece of poetry!! let us start with the title. It was really attractive and catchy, and ... -
Re: The Rule Of The Alien Queen...
Wow! That's great! The humans would call then "Blobs". Thank yu so much for the idea!
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: The Rule Of The Alien Queen...
Hey, my friend, thanks a loot! Well... that wasn't rude at all. :D And...I have tried to describe the Mars, the night and the spaceship now. You may have a ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: The Rule Of The Alien Queen...
Scary alien name... Hmm... how would be Creepy Crawlies? Suggest something... I am not gettingany other names. Thank you so much for your sweet and lovely review, MoonFlower! :D
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: The Rule Of The Alien Queen...
Thank you so much, alevine!! I am glad that you liked it. I never thught I could write something in a sci-fi genre... but I was determinant to do it. ...
Jun 25, 2016 -
Re: Books and Photographs
You are welC! xD
Jun 25, 2016 -
Re: The Rule Of The Alien Queen...
Thank you so much for the review, SofieR! I have edited the things. :D
Jun 24, 2016 -
Re: Temple Run
Yaay! :D
Jun 20, 2016 -
Re: The Whole World Became a Gay!!!
Thx for the review!
Jun 20, 2016 -
Re: The Whole World Became a Gay!!!
yeah, the whole thing is an exception to transgenders, because they are very few. And, if everyone was gay, no one could reproduce. It would make change in the population ...
Jun 20, 2016 -
Re: Pretty Boy Chapter 1
Yaayy!! It was amazingly awesome!! :D Loved it!
Jun 20, 2016
