Eros

hmm.... okay... I will try to add some now, in the next chapter or edit this one... flaws. lol actually, English being the second language, makes it difficult to write ...

:D I like talking to you...

OMG ..I wasn't aware of so many typos lol Did they have a history where Richie had fooled them before, and magnets were involved? It's just that Lamarch doens't believe ...

Hey!! Thanks for the Review! Yeah, I got the typos and the punctuation and other things now... But actually, "Plee don' get ttoned", Gothy's mouth was full of chips,"Od inttead ...

Oh My God... That's great! :D

Yeah, that's a great possibility for it too!

I have edited this one, but I don't think I am much successful. But I'll improve gradually :D

Hey there, LanaOverLand!! This was a GREAT review. I loved your suggestions for improvement and I am trying to edit this part and the next before I write further... Thanks ...

Thanks for the review!

Thank you so much ! Now since it's in the spotlight, I will definitely make some more comics and will improve on it more... Thank you so much ! You ...

Thank you so much !! That's the best review I have ever got... It was my dream that I want my characters to be loved by the readers ... Thank ...

Thank you so much !! I am glad you liked it !!

Oh it was that she died during childbirth . . Yeah, I just got confused coz of the line, "The baby coos as she splashes loudly in the brook"... But ...

Okay.... Yes, Caleb doesn't know it. I am really enjoying the read. I read the next chapter and if possible I will review it .. I am not good at ...

Yo... I am reading the next chapters too... Will try to review as much as I can .. :D