Eraqio

Very dainty yet solid in construction. The flow was easily coprehended and it helped with the easy going almost dreamy feel throughout. I Enjoyed it, I always love things having ...

love the chaos!! chaos chaos and more chaos!! its like if rome was burning and the people in the streets started singing a requiem and then adding on some rocky ...

This seems more to me like a monologue....thats just me. Very deep in language and imagery, I could see the subject struggling in the mental corner they felt they were ...

*stumbles over first few stanzas. I liked it. It was over enough that I immediately got a slight picture of what you were 'implying' but it remained lucid enough that ...

The Title wasnt very interesting, you should know that. Oddly enough I think it was its banal nature that attracted me in the first place. anyways, other than a few ...

Pretty. To say the least. It dragged on, towards the end, just a tad. But it was forgivable as this had so much to say for itself. The connection the ...

Touching. Really, all sarcasm that I COULD unload on you aside, very, very touching. The opening comes off as childishly shy, almost a kind of guilty explanation for the topic, ...

It seems insightful, but it still holds a disgusted distance between the reader, the subject and even the faceless character being spoken of. Very appealing, I'm glad you shot for ...

Pretty. Honestly, very Pretty. Very few pieces are pretty, a kind of awkward sweetness that pulls at something, emotions, anything, but none the less this was a nice peice. I ...

I found some typical rhyme schemes throughout and I got the usual melancholy feeling associated with a love lost. It was good, in topic and overall composition, but I think ...

Wow! Definately a star! This had an energy that was almost chaotic yet very structured. The descriptive language and suggestion to the reader and or poem's intended target was very ...

This poem seems like more of a short moment description, not a poem so much. Odd to come from me but I still diddnt get much connectivity beyond the progression ...

I like the concept. Sorry, I'm not much for reviewing right now, just went to a viewing of a dead relative and I'm going to the funeral tomorrow. Anyways, I ...

Very proper language. It diddnt really come off as lyrical to me. As prose, maybe, I dont know I'm no expert. On to content. This was a great work, to ...

Great work o.0 I'm stunned, to be honest. The visuals and emotional workings of this poem are very deep and complex, I loved it. The only real problem I have ...