Epicdonkalous

This is a semi-review, I guess. Overall, the plot seems pretty interesting. Now, the first of the fighting seemed a bit slow, a bit hard to grasp. That being said, ...

Hey there! Well, I applaud you for attempting to discuss this. I think you've a nice concept, and you'd be able to do something with it. That being said, this ...

Hey there! Let me start off by saying you chose a very, very overplayed and largely repeated concept. I can't say you did anything new. I like the simplicity of ...

Hey there! First off, let me congratulate you on having such a popular poem! That being said, it didn't do much for me at all. It was far too short ...

Hey there! I really enjoyed this concept! At first, I was /so/ confused, all "what. Stone man. Huh. what.", but as the poem progressed, I understood and thought it was ...

Hey there! Ah, romance, heartbreak, a very common subject! I did enjoy how you conveyed the emotions of being hurt and angry, as one would be over such, so good ...

Hey there! Well this is a concept not covered very much, so good on you for that! That being said, this poem didn't do much for me - it didn't ...

Hey there! Well I love the concept- yay night! Now, this should be longer. So much longer, I feel, for lyrics. I also feel like I've seen/read this before? On ...

Hey there, babycakes! ;D Alrighty alrighty, the beginning just sucked me in, so good on you for that! Also, the title is quite compelling - I wanted to know how ...

Hey there! Well, I like that you wrote a poem on your character - it helps development. I'll be completely honest and say I didn't even finish this, so maybe ...

Hey there! Hm. I can't tell if I love or hate this, but I do like the message. I felt like this is true, sadly, that we don't give people ...

Hey there! Alright, first off, I LOVED the topic! I always want to write about writing a poem, and it never ends well - this, though, was very nice! I ...

Hey there! Wow, I actually really enjoyed this! I usually hate anything remotely religious, but this was quite nice. I /adored/ the first two lines, I wanted to read on ...

Hey there! Really nice concept you hit on, I haven't really seen much of it, so bravo for that ! That being said, I honestly think the first two stanzas ...

Hey there! To begin with, you tackled a, pardon my pun, very dark subject. I think you did it rather well, explaining the feelings that one would have as "darkness", ...