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I like this poem and the way it seems to rhyme effortlessly, the only problem is the spelling but that has been pointed out already. Good Work and keep writing ...

This was a really nice poem, I don't really have anything for you to improve on but I would like to say that I loved the last stanza the rhyming ...

Thanks everyone for the reveiws! The next chapter is up if you are interested :D

This is very cool. Me like.

I'm not saying you haven't been through it i'm just saying that it is a very used topic and you presented it in a different and good way :)

Is this just me or have you not said how Lily has found out that James likes her it just seems to jump into her knowing that he likes her ...

This was brillient please post the next chapter :)

Rayne she means side as in the mashed potatoes on the side as in not important not in the middle of her circle.

Yay I wrote that with you XD But cupcake you should have it in lyrics O_o

The flow isn't quite right but I like how it is sort of like a fairytale like what they would finish a fairytale off with at the end of a ...

Thanks for all the reveiws guys!

Define cute. I was meaning the idea in particular I don't think that grammer really matters you can learn punctuation but true inspiration for writing a good story comes from ...

I like this style of writing poetry with the questions but I don't quite get what your writing about and it doesn't seem quite finished but that might be just ...

I like this poem it flowed quite nicely and I could tell it was very heartfelt Well done!

Everyone else has said basicly everything so all I would like to say is I enjoyed this poem quite well done!