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Hello! Okay well there is not much for me to say as Azila and WickedWonder have covered most of it but let me say I really liked this piece for ...

Hi! I love the description and the showing you have displayed that make it a pleasure to read. Although I found myself getting confused as to what was happening. Is ...

Hello! First of all I like the idea of the story, the imagery was pretty good with the descriptions of the characters and such. The only problem is I find ...

Hello! I've been reading your novel for a while now and I really like it. First I like how you portray Cedric and Trista, how Cedric is charming,funny ect I ...

This is a pretty good poem although I noticed this: Your voice is smooth as ice, as you whisper my name. My pain and suffering won't suffice! Your new torture ...

SweetMoments here to review! First, this is a nice poem with nice imagery as well. Now for the nit-picks. Here I stand, in the shadows behind her, watching tears fall ...

Okay, I really liked this story and the plot of it all. I would really like to hear more from this novel. Now nerdy nit-picks, first Voldermort didn't have any ...

Hello! I really like this poem but as you said there are some words that don't quite fit into the rest of the poem. Comments will be in bold , ...

This is a great piece full of raw emotion, but I think you would polish it up a bit with the grammar and spelling :) I think you could put ...

First of all I really liked this I think it would be a great like you know, beginning for a movie of something while the credit thingies at the start ...

Wow, sorry cupcake I didn't realize you had a new poem ;) With every step you climb another mountain With every glance it's harder to believe You'll make it through ...

I think this would be better if you worked on the flow and put it into stanzas. Changes are in bold Comments are in bold and fragments from a sentence ...

This was very good writing and makes the reader want to read more, all that a prologue should be. Well done! Although I was confused to who the main character ...

This was really good but really scary at the same time, (In a good way :P) I have no nitpicks on this I was just reading it and wanted to ...

Personally I like the ending and love the piece in particular. :) Although I would like it if it had more description about who Conner is (Is it the person ...