EndlessPest

Sounds like a few saturday nights I have! I think you could go somewhere with this idea if like you say, you expand upon the characters so maybe choose one ...

Interesting rhyme scheme, the images are powerful. I like it, I think you could expand on this by making better use of a stanza structure as well as potentially using ...

A good attitude to have! In terms of writing style and how to structure I think that could be improved. To me it comes across as more of a rant ...

I am so happy I read this! To be fair I most likely would not have, had it not been for the warning... May Contain Sheep is one I may ...

Very interesting. I found it dark, reflective and searching. I had to re-read it a few times to really appreciate what you were trying to achieve but I love the ...

An interesting read and slightly humorous. I enjoyed your poem and thought that for what could've been a serious or cynical subject you treated it with a touch of light ...

I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing, I found it motivating and inspirational. I look forward to reading more of your work. The rhyme scheme was interesting and works ...