EnchantedPanda

Hello bandgeek101, EnchnatedPanda here to review your poem! I really enjoyed the sweetness and simplicity of your poem and the underlying hopefulness that is obvious when reading. It's got a ...

Hello KelliLocks, EnchantedPanda here to review your poem. This poem has great morals behind it. It's one of those happy-go-lucky style pieces that leaves you with a good message and ...

Hello penprincess, EnchantedPanda here to review your poem! This is an interesting topic. I've never read a poem about this topic before and certainly not one with an ending like ...

Hello magpie94, EnchantedPanda back to review for you again as requested! Wow! This is good. It's actually a lot better than the other poem of yours that I reviewed. Well, ...

Hello shulchan, EnchantedPanda here to review as requested! Okay, you've got a really good start here but I definitely see the obvious problems with this, so I'll cut the chase ...

Hello kazhy419, EnchantedPanda here to review as requested! Holy cow this is awesome! It's better than the first chapter, a lot better. It's got an entirely different tone to it ...

Hello Kazhy419, Panda here to review as requested! Oooh this is interesting! Its ages since if read or reviewed anything like this and it’s exciting to read something so unique ...

Hello marivisan, EnchantedPanda here to review as requested. Wow! Seriously, this is amazing. It was so intense and fast paced, yet it made sense at the same time. It wasn't ...

Hello mihavisan, Panda here to review as requested! You've already had some pretty detailed reviews, so I'll keep this brief. This is good. The description at the start was really ...

Hello mihaivisan, This is really good, I loved it. I liked the thought behind it and the whole idea was really original, I've never read anything like this before- it's ...

Hello kayfortnight, I really liked this. You've established a really good sense of fluidity throughout this and I found your consistency with the style of language used and the wording ...

Hello magpie94, What a great poem- it really packs a punch! I particularly enjoyed your use of imagery, you're brief but concise with your descriptions and it really helps set ...

Hello marivisan, Firstly may I praise you on your excellent writing, I found this piece very original. I've never read anything very similar to this before and it had an ...

Hello Maddymayhem, I really like the language style you've used for this. It's written with very beautiful language and yet at the same time gives, kind of, dark imagery. It's ...

Hello LovelyTeaRoses, Firstly, well done! I really enjoyed reading this, the pureness and honesty of your words really helps make it powerful and emotive. I also like how you haven't ...