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Re: The Flight of Icarus
Hello lilcanich, EnchantedPanda here to review for you! You've already had some pretty thorough review so I'll just give you my general impressions of this poem. Not sure that I ...
Apr 30, 2013 -
Re: Family First
Hello Jpball, EnchantedPanda here to give you a quick review on your poem! This is sweet but at the same time it's incredibly, incredibly simple. There's absolutely nothing wrong with ...
Apr 22, 2013 -
Re: Traveling Through the 13 Colonies
Hello chandowd, EnchantedPanda here to review for you as requested! Your story was... brief to say the least. What you've got here is actually really good and your plot and ...
Apr 11, 2013 -
Re: Ruthless Hurricanes and Gentle Showers
Hello Swiftfur, EnchantedPanda here to review for you! N'aww, this is so sweet. I love the way you've approached rainfall and compared it to positivity and negativity. The similes you've ...
Apr 7, 2013 -
Re: The voice
Hello Hanorah, EnchantedPanda here to review for you! Ahhh, this is such a cute little poem you've got here. I really liked the theme of listening to what our heart ...
Apr 7, 2013 -
Re: The Spark
Hello ArcticMonkey, EnchantedPanda here to review for you as requested! Okay, I see what you mean when you said poetry wasn't your strongest points. For a beginner at poetry this ...
Apr 7, 2013 -
Re: .
Hello dark, EnchantedPanda here to review your haiku for you! I can never personally write these very well myself- for a short poem they can be pretty tricky to master. ...
Apr 6, 2013 -
Re: Under the stars
Hello HHeymad, EnchantedPanda here to review for you today. I don't have much time so I'll keep this short and cut straight to the chase. First of all nice work, ...
Apr 5, 2013 -
Re: Freedom
Hello lili024, EnchantedPanda here to review your poem! I noticed that you've already got some reviews so I'll just give you my general impression of your writing and skip straight ...
Apr 4, 2013 -
Re: Center of circle of life.
Hello manisha, EnchantedPanda here to give you a quick review on your poem! I really liked this. It's got a kind of happy-go-lucky feel to it and it actually makes ...
Apr 3, 2013 -
Re: Ferrozine Woman
Hello niteowl, EnchantedPanda here to review for you! Sheeeesh! This is crazy stuff! This is really, really good nite! It's incredible to read something this good, you've really captured something ...
Apr 2, 2013 -
Re: The Devil's Dance
Hello PumpkinCat, EnchantedPanda here to review your poem! Oooh, I like this, it's got a really eerie and dark feel to it and you've done an excellent job conveying the ...
Apr 2, 2013 -
Re: It's impossible not to.
Hello lyssiekins, EnchantedPanda here to review your poem for you! This is actually a really beautiful poem. I love your verbs and adjectives that you've used to describe the fluidity ...
Apr 2, 2013 -
Re: Stair Idly
Hello Aley, EnchantedPanda here to review your poem. This was an interesting read. I liked the style of writing you used where you switched thoughts and ideas almost dramatically because ...
Apr 2, 2013 -
Re: Just Like Everyday
Hello Rainn, EnchantedPanda here to review your lovely poem as requested! Wow! This is actually really cool. I see what you mean when you said this had a weird style ...
Apr 1, 2013
