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Re: Sarah
This is just... beautiful! It really spoke out to me. It's like I could tell how distraught you're feeling right now and... It's so sad. :) Love xxx
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: Forgotten.
Hello!! Rain here!! So, I really like this poem, it was really good, I like the beginning the best though. Faded eyes And stormy skies, Lowly shadows, And twisted lies. ...
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: Lone Sullen
This is beautiful! So emotive :) xxx
Dec 12, 2010 -
Re: If I Must Die
I love poems that rhyme, and this one has perfect imagery too... I really liked it :) xxx
Dec 12, 2010 -
Re: Hope
I love this :) It's very... dark With a happy ending. SO my style :) xxx
Dec 12, 2010 -
Re: Life
Short and totally sweet :) Keep writing poetry. I loved this! It's cute xx
Dec 12, 2010 -
Re: Oh and here is your knife back
You've told a story through descriptive poetry and i love it... :) xxx
Dec 11, 2010 -
Re: The Kill
These lyrics are awesome! Definately my type of music. I can imagine singing along to this ;) Well done ! xxx
Dec 11, 2010 -
Re: Dead Magic.
Beautiful :) You really put images in my head. Keep on writing poetry xx
Dec 11, 2010 -
Re: Devil
I love this. Like, everybody hides behind a mask? That;s the sense that I get out of this, anyway. I love it :) xxx
Dec 11, 2010 -
Re: Schizophrenia
Wow. I love this. Real heartfelt stuff :) xxx
Dec 11, 2010 -
Re: The Golden Gate Bridge
Wow! That is just so awesome and INSIRATIONAL! You've left alot to the imaginatio and I love that. I love the flow of the whole thing. xxx
Dec 11, 2010 -
Re: Just another broken heart in the sand
Beautiful imigary :) xxx
Dec 11, 2010 -
Re: So This Is Goodbye
Beautiful :) I could REALLY feel, with the way you described and your writing style xx
Dec 10, 2010 -
Re: Dear Dreamer
When I read this, it really MEANT something too me. I could FEEL it. You sir, are an awesome writer :) xxx
Dec 10, 2010
