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Re: Cut Me Down
Hello there:) I thought this poem was really good, well done :) Your work has a nice flow and I think you did a a good job of getting the ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Roses and Chocolate
Hey :) I just wanted to give you a review on your poem too, thanks for the review on mine:) I really really looove this piece. But I have admit ...
Dec 22, 2013 -
Re: Alone Among Ashes
Hello:) I really loved this piece, it was so well-written. I don't really have any correction, the story was just so haunting, very beautiful. I like the way the child ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Will: The One I Wish the Best
Hey I'm just going to give you my thoughts on the story here as well :) I really liked it :) The only thing I am not that crazy about ...
Aug 28, 2013 -
Re: Just One Question
Hello :D It thought I would review your piece, because you reviewed mine :) This is a great piece, I really like it. I just love the whole piece ( ...
Jul 29, 2013 -
Re: Complaint letters to Count Von-Draco about consumption of own babies.
Hi there :) This is so great! Very funny. The idea is so original! I like everything about this:) It is really an unique take on human/vampire relationship. And you ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: Bitter Sweet
Hi there :) I'm here to review your poem :) It's a great poem, I just think it could use a little spice :) Something to make it raelly stand ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: In the old white house
Hello there! I'm here to review your piece :) Wow this is amazing! It was so touching and tragic and beautifully written ! :) Your are describing the scenario so ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: Wish a curse...
Hi there :9 I'm here to review your piece :) I think it is great. It is a really unique poem. It is very dark and mysterious. I like that ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: Invisible.
Hi there :) Wow. This was AMAZING :) Very interesting ! :) I thought is was a very beautyful way, to write something that so many people know about, it ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: Slipping Away- Chapter 1
Hi there :) I'm here to review your work:) I really like this. It is very interesting :) First some nitpicks: In the second paragraph: "I took the last of ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: Dear Pops
Hi there :) Wow. This was so beautiful and so touching! :) You really got the emotion across, and made a very personal and amazing poem. :) It is so ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: Alice in Wonderland 2010 film review
Hello tiggpanda145 :) This review is very impressive. I think your language and sentence structure is just great. It flows very nicely :) You made this movie seem amazing, and ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: Who am I?
Hi thewritersdream ! :) This is really good. Like, really really good ;) I think you had a great idea and turned it into something amazing. It is very beauitul. ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: Listen, Please
Hi there, I'm here to give you a review :) Wow, I really really like this. I thougth it was a truly great poem :) It was very interesting and ...
Jul 28, 2013