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Re: Oh little marshmallow Peeps
wow. it so very captures everyone's deep desire to steal all of the candy section, especially all of the good extra-sugary parts, and run away and pig out. I also ...
Feb 17, 2010 -
Re: To My Love I Have Never Met (Villanelle)
This poem is pretty strange... i don't get it. Is there an arranged marriage, or an online relationship, or... hmmm.... Well, i guess that villanelle is a very... different scheme ...
Feb 17, 2010 -
Re: Every Mile Every Second
I am really liking this little piece. don't worry about the length of a prologue, because i was recently editing one of my things and it was only 1302 characters ...
Feb 17, 2010 -
Re: My Pale December
hey i'm kelly and i will totally be reviewing this pretty epic poem. okay, so to start: I like this poem. "is a like a new born cherry..." i think ...
Feb 17, 2010 -
Re: The Breakout
That was... interesting. I liked your idea of a vampire that hates it,and is trying to escape. (hmm... sound familiar? just stay away from names like Edward, Edwin, Jake/Jacob and ...
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: The Day Things Went Wrong
Well, this is a very strange and original story. Um, is there going to be a chapter two, or is this a stand- alone? This doesn't seem to be a ...
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: Messages: Chapter One
This was a pretty good piece. It was long, but had nice and short chapters. Even the shortest story is impossible to read if its only one or two mega- ...
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: T.V.
i like this poem. You captured the feeling of everyone who watches t v- i need it, i hate it. the flow is a little bit strange, however. Umm... was ...
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: At the End of a Deployment
This is really well written- i like the part about her worrying about the two of them being different, but in the end they're not. "all for not." I'm pretty ...
Feb 8, 2010 -
Re: The Slick Floor chapter 4
Hello!! :D "Darkness envelopes me, it pulls me under its wicked cape." Epicly awesome. just saying. :arrow: "A sweet feeling of floating then I awake, my mind is blurred, and ...
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: The Slick Floor- Prologue/ Chapter 1
Hi! i'm Kelly and i'm gonna be reviewing your story today!! ( I also am spectacular at stating the obvious, by the way) :D great story. i like the beginning, ...
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: A new home, A new Love ( intro)
Hello! I'm Kelly and I'll review today... kk, so generally i liked the story. The title is very nice and it grabs the attention of the reader. I like how ...
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: Loss - Part 2
I like this part a lot too. YOu know what I just realized? I have a story by the exact same name, and your profile pic (cat from red dwarf) ...
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: Loss - Part 1
Okay, so that was a really good story. Rally good descriptions! :arrow: in the beginging, it says Sibo is his "newly found love" what does that mean? :D I like ...
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: the Apocalypse
I rally liked this piece. I barely noticed the rhyme and when i read it the second time i figured out he rhyme and was like, whoa, thats cool. so, ...
Feb 2, 2010
